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Abendwind/ Evening wind/ Viento de la noche

Auf dunklem Wasser Das Säuseln des Abendwinds Mit kleinen Wellen --------------------------------- On dark water Murmur of evening winds With tiny waves --------------------------------- Sobre agua oscura El susurro del viento Con pequeñas olas Note: To follow Haiku-rules, the Spanish version is different

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 10/29/2010 12:52:00 PM
Beautiful Haiku, Gert! I can visualize the tiny waves.
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Date: 10/24/2010 11:33:00 AM
Hey... did you have a good time with your guests?
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Date: 10/24/2010 9:54:00 AM
We have a large lake in the backyard here in NJ, Gert, and you can sit on the dock any night and listen to the wind while watching the ripples. What a wonderful haiku, my friend. It's so nice to have you back again. I hope you had fun with your visitors. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/24/2010 8:00:00 AM
this is yet another cool haiku Gert-- enjoyed each line :) and glad you like my pseudonym although I think I'm changing back to my name real soon again ;) thank you as well for all your wonderful comments :) have a great week yourself & hoping with you about those typhoons :) ingat! -- nikko :)
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Date: 10/24/2010 7:41:00 AM
I liked the german version! good job
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Date: 10/23/2010 9:58:00 PM
I love both the spanish AND the English, Gert. Great picture created. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/23/2010 1:46:00 PM
the spanish version ""esta mui bonito"" love it Gert, I love the dreaminess and smoothness, of the late night ocean waves.. What a way to enjoy your poem and wind.,,..p.d.
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Date: 10/23/2010 11:13:00 AM
Such a tranquil image, Gert. Loved your little haiku. Have a great day;) Hugs, Emilia
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Date: 10/23/2010 7:28:00 AM
Enjoyed your Haiku this morning ...I could just see the dark sea with lights reflections and the wind rippling the waves..I am glad that I chose this one to read this A.M...Sara
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Date: 10/22/2010 3:29:00 PM
Reminds me of the sunset beach on warm sunny nights luv.. an enjoyable creative read my friend.. have a happy weekend ..with luv..
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Date: 10/22/2010 3:11:00 PM
I always enjoy your haiku soothes the soul. Lovely as always! :)
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Date: 10/22/2010 9:35:00 AM
Picturesque...may have more than one interpretations when relating to life...Love this Gert..Always a pleasure to read.. Hope you're well? Love, Audrey
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