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Abendwind/ Evening Wind/ Viento De La Noche

Auf dunklem Wasser
Das Säuseln des Abendwinds
Mit kleinen Wellen

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On dark water
Murmur of evening winds
With tiny waves

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Sobre agua oscura
El susurro del viento 
Con pequeñas olas 



Note: To follow Haiku-rules, the Spanish version is different

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Kim Hilliker Date: 10/29/2010 12:52:00 PM Beautiful Haiku, Gert! I can visualize the tiny waves. Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 10/24/2010 11:33:00 AM Hey... did you have a good time with your guests? Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 10/24/2010 9:54:00 AM We have a large lake in the backyard here in NJ, Gert, and you can sit on the dock any night and listen to the wind while watching the ripples. What a wonderful haiku, my friend. It's so nice to have you back again. I hope you had fun with your visitors. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 10/24/2010 8:00:00 AM this is yet another cool haiku Gert-- enjoyed each line :) and glad you like my pseudonym although I think I'm changing back to my name real soon again ;) thank you as well for all your wonderful comments :) have a great week yourself & hoping with you about those typhoons :) ingat! -- nikko :) Login to Reply

Susan Palli Date: 10/24/2010 7:41:00 AM I liked the german version! good job Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/23/2010 9:58:00 PM I love both the spanish AND the English, Gert. Great picture created. Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/23/2010 1:46:00 PM the spanish version ""esta mui bonito"" love it Gert, I love the dreaminess and smoothness, of the late night ocean waves.. What a way to enjoy your poem and wind.,,..p.d. Login to Reply

De R Date: 10/23/2010 11:13:00 AM Such a tranquil image, Gert. Loved your little haiku. Have a great day;) Hugs, Emilia Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/23/2010 7:28:00 AM Enjoyed your Haiku this morning ...I could just see the dark sea with lights reflections and the wind rippling the waves..I am glad that I chose this one to read this A.M...Sara Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 10/22/2010 3:29:00 PM Reminds me of the sunset beach on warm sunny nights luv.. an enjoyable creative read my friend.. have a happy weekend ..with luv.. Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 10/22/2010 3:11:00 PM I always enjoy your haiku poetry...it soothes the soul. Lovely as always! :) Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 10/22/2010 9:35:00 AM Picturesque...may have more than one interpretations when relating to life...Love this Gert..Always a pleasure to read.. Hope you're well? Love, Audrey Login to Reply