Abduction For Matt Caliri's "poems To Movies" Contest

"You here?"

"Will...?"

"Never on time....man" "He's going to 

win this case just because of these pictures"...He begins to look through the photos.

The private eye cracks a smile and begins to hum

Spaceman...by the Killers

"Of all the songs to get stuck in my head while waiting"

"The stupid song's been stuck in my head for what feels like a 

year." (stands up and appears to be getting apprehensive) "I should win a freaking 

award for the amount of work i'm putting into this case"

"I can't take the waiting anymore."  (He begins to pace and dials his phone)

"Will? ugh, voicemail"

"So, where are you? I can't take waiting here much more, GET HERE!"(hangs up the phone)

"You tell people to be on time and they 

haven't the respect for how busy I really am."

The setting is a bleak dark alley, a place where 

love is replaced by pain, where the light 

of day barely penetrates.

Humanity is replaced by brutality in these cold, dark alleys of the city.

For a moment our character looks to the sky between the buildings and sees a strange light.

It seems to stop flying for a moment, 

"Get outta here, is that??"

Off in the distance the light (which was small at first), begins to be getting brighter and closer.

"My GOD, is that a 

spaceship?" A blinding beam suddenly brightens the alley way and our character is gone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Cwiak Avatar
June 2, 2010 at 1:07 AM
Well done! Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
Fraser Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 11:46 AM
Nice one JC, great track by the way. Many congratulations on your 1st place in Matt's contest >> James
Burton Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 5:38 AM
Thats different, truthfully I enjoyed this alot and you might want to advertise it. Enjoy your day.:)
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