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ominous clouds abduct full moon's warmth~ earth's lavender of onlookers 3/19/2021 17 syllables Poetry Contest: Lets Get Creative With Haiku. Sponsored by: Constance La France 1. One NEW Non-Traditonal Haiku in seventeen syllables or LESS with a turn in direction on the final line or word, *very important* 2. Nature only, no humanity so, NO . . . I, me, or we 3. Written "in the moment" so, NO past tense, such as was. 4. No capitalization(INCLUDING TITLE), or unnecessary punctuation.

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Date: 4/15/2021 2:14:00 AM
Nice highjacking ...
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Date: 3/26/2021 7:08:00 PM
PS Congrats on a well deserved win. JB
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Date: 3/26/2021 7:07:00 PM
This is quite the nice Haiku. And I do so love this pic. Great job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/26/2021 2:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love your write and picture. Have a blessed day/weekend...............
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Date: 3/25/2021 12:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely haiku.
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Date: 3/24/2021 3:26:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my challenge Let's Get Creative With Haiku and you did exactly that, I love this non traditional Haiku, well done _Constance
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Date: 3/22/2021 7:04:00 PM
very creative Eve, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/22/2021 4:43:00 PM
A vividly descriptive haiku, Eve! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 3/22/2021 2:23:00 PM
I really really like yours. I bet making that last line into two lines would have made this a first place! I did not realize people were doing four lines until I looked around and was seeing it. Anyway, this is stunning imagery. Congrats.
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Date: 3/22/2021 2:23:00 PM
that middle line is WOW
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Date: 3/22/2021 1:14:00 PM
So masterfully penned Eve. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 3/22/2021 1:01:00 PM
- Back with a congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/20/2021 2:17:00 PM
Lovely. Unique approach. Quite a capture.
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Date: 3/20/2021 10:56:00 AM
Hello Eve, A nice abduction for a change, in beautiful verse. I think I'm going to like this contest. -Richard
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Date: 3/20/2021 7:21:00 AM
Brilliant haiku, Eve. Really enjoyed the poem and the picture. Thanks for the placement in your contest. It was great fun! Now I am hooked to it. Love ~ Mala
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Date: 3/20/2021 5:01:00 AM
Lovely, Eve ~
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Date: 3/20/2021 4:58:00 AM
Very creative and descriptive work that reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest. Sara
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Date: 3/20/2021 2:00:00 AM
You followed the rules very well. Best for a win.
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Date: 3/19/2021 7:48:00 PM
I agree with Carolyn, brilliant photo and haiku:)
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Date: 3/19/2021 7:12:00 PM
This is hauntingly beautiful. I enjoyed it so much, Eve. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/19/2021 3:34:00 PM
- Beautifully written :) - Best wishes in the contest, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/19/2021 3:11:00 PM
You describe the photo beautifully, Eve. And it's quite a photo! Best wishes in Constance's contest. Hugs, Carolyn
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