Abc

Attractive apple

angry agile ape~
ate an attractive apple,
abducts another

Brimmed basket

black beauty brings big
bright blue berries, brimmed basket~
bestows beloved

Calm colleen

cosy cotton coat,
cuddles crazy classy curves~ 
carried calm colleen

18-7-2020

Second Place  in the contest.
Note:Let the Pens Flow - Alliteration Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Jenish Somadas.

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Jenish Somadas

Date: 8/9/2020 12:55:00 AM

lovely imagery.. Congrats on your great win Deepa..

V. Deepa
Date: 8/10/2020 6:22:00 AM

Thankyou Jenish sir for your lovely appreciation and placement.:-)Your contest's are inspirational.It triggers my mind to come up with these cute imageries.:-)Keep inspiring us and keep writing too. Take care.Warmest regards:-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2020 12:07:00 PM

You kept close to the front of the alphabet like I did. I really like what you came up with, especially the ape who abducts apples. Congrats, V

V. Deepa
Date: 8/10/2020 6:19:00 AM

Haha.Is it?!..Will check your poem soon Andrea mam. Thankyou for your kind appreciation.Glad that you liked my alliteration of Ape story;-) Take care.Much love~Deepa:-)

Aditi Mishra

Date: 8/8/2020 5:49:00 AM

Blue berries and calm colleen...your creativity leaps Deepa. This is so beautiful. Congratulations on your win! Much love :)

V. Deepa
Date: 8/10/2020 6:15:00 AM

Thankyou very much dear Aditi mam for your lovely appreciation:-) An pleased to know it's beautiful:-) Take care.Much love:-)

John Watt

Date: 8/7/2020 11:09:00 AM

Enjoyed your alliterations, Deepa. Congratulations on your win. Keep up the great writing! ~ John

V. Deepa
Date: 8/10/2020 6:13:00 AM

Thankyou John Sir for your kind appreciation and uplifting words.:-) Glad that you enjoyed my work:-). Take care.Warm regards sent to you..

Anisha Dutta

Date: 7/27/2020 5:25:00 AM

Good approach Deepa. I admire. All the best. Are you an Indian ?

V. Deepa
Date: 7/27/2020 6:05:00 AM

Hello Anisha mam, Good evening.Thanks a lot for your kind visit and appreciation:-) Yes, I am an Indian like you:-) Warmest regards~Deepa.

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 7/23/2020 10:38:00 PM

Deepa, brilliant! This is a winner in my book. Best of luck!

V. Deepa
Date: 7/24/2020 12:14:00 AM

Hi Krish sir, Thanks a lot for your kind visit ,appreciation,support & encouragement:-) My best wishes will always be there for you sir.Keep writing & Keep inspiring. Take care.Warmest regards~Deepa:-)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/18/2020 9:40:00 PM

Well written Deepa, looks a tricky one to write. Tom

V. Deepa
Date: 7/19/2020 2:06:00 AM

Hello Tom sir, Thanks a lot for always encouraging me.:-) I understood alliteration looking at jenish sir's example.So I just gave it a try :-)Am pleased that you liked it. I believe you can surely do a better one than us.Give it a try. Have a wonderful day sir:-) Warmest regards~Deepa:-)