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Abbreviated Slide and Crawl

Check out Darwin Barney's abbreviated slide and crawl into third It's on YouTube, even Darwin laughed at himself, how absurd For all the Blue Jays fans Got them off their hands Worth the admission, a fun spot in a dismal year for the birds

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/14/2017 2:46:00 PM

Hi Jack! What a lovely day for baseball enjoy.

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/14/2017 3:17:00 PM

What a lovely day for love AND baseball!!! Greetings Miss Patricia xxx

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 9/14/2017 8:45:00 AM

First we crawl, then we walk//First we babble, then we talk//the job got done//the fans had fun//and the sportscasters had a good squawk. FLAP ON JACKIE BOY!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/14/2017 8:49:00 AM

Sure made the hi-light reels!!! LOL HAVE A GOOD ONE JJ!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/14/2017 5:53:00 AM

Too bad for the Blue Jay's this year, but I do have to say that they did better than my team, the Cincinnati Reds! We both are the bottom of the barrel I have to say! Oh well, such is life--C'est La Vie! Going to your write, it is fantastic my friend! I always enjoy a good sports poem, they are fun to read, especially when they are funny like this one! I surely enjoyed reading your fabulous piece this morning! Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/14/2017 6:33:00 AM

You must check it out... it was hilarious and he was a good sport about it! A GOOD CHUCKLE!!!