Abbotsford Road

I'm swept up in mixed emotions
when I walk down Abbotsford Road.
They fill my memory-ocean 
where waves of feeling erode
the moments from my childhood
when time was an endless stream
of games and imagination,
of very first hopes and dreams.
The trees have grown so tall,
as they reach toward the sky.
The gardens flourish and sprawl
past lilacs that sway and sigh
against the backyard gate,
which I've pushed a thousand times
to watch the apple blossoms  
fall from trees we used to climb.
The house still looks the same,
though I know it's changed inside.
Someone else is dreaming dreams
in the room that once was mine.


Written: 2015/09/08
For Verlena's "A child's first home" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Fleming Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 1:05 AM
Very nicely expressed, Heather - Congratulations! Best regards! :-) john
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October 22, 2015 at 1:20 PM
Heather, Congratulations on "A child's first home WIN." **SKAT**
Haight Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 5:12 PM
So heartfelt and lovely, Laura. Full of emotion so poetically expressed. Congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 6:49 AM
PS I made you a favorite poet too!
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 6:48 AM
Oh Heather, I dearly love your beautiful entry filled with colors and sublime imagery. I want to fave this! Congratulations on your well deserved win!
Breidenthal Avatar
September 11, 2015 at 12:32 AM
This is beautiful, Heather..."They fill my memory-ocean where waves of feeling erode" Love those delightful lines...and the last two lines are haunting..Always, Laura
Dietrich Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 9:30 PM
wow, this is so beautifully written. You are truly gifted, Heather. I want to write of my old home but I know it will never look like this.
Allison Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 3:16 PM
This hit home hard with me I am just selling my parent's home so the final lines are very poignant :-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx 7
Sathasivam Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 2:49 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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