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Abandonment

The Bitterness of Abandonment Flows Most Forcefully in Memories The Hope Endures during the Longing Journey Leaving No Time But For The Present Lost For Good The Inner Compass Fatefully Broken The Bond Never to Be Sealed Cast Out Amongst the Unforgiven Seas Only Love Sweet Love Can Steereth You Home

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/9/2012 10:38:00 AM

A well deserved win for you in the #193 contest. Congratulations Donald. Love, Carol

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 8/5/2012 10:57:00 AM

Wise words, Donald! Yes, only love...a beauty you have written. Congrats on your win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/3/2012 7:32:00 PM

this is very nice, Donald. Lovely message,and congrats in the contest.

Donald Reith

Date: 8/3/2012 9:44:00 AM

Thanks all for your kind and considerate comments. The best compliment of my work is to see it validated by my peers.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/3/2012 8:23:00 AM

Congratulations Donald xx

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/2/2012 9:51:00 AM

Congrats on your win Donald..Some really nice lines in this one. BG

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/2/2012 5:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#193" contest Donald. Love, Carol

Kerry Singleton

Date: 7/21/2012 2:51:00 AM

Great write Donald, how true love will steer you home every time! :)

Audrey Haick

Date: 7/15/2012 2:59:00 PM

This stirs the soul as you read it, Donald...I read it twice. It's also my belief that Love is all..the only thing that holds us here, today. Great instrospective write! Thanks for sharing it and thanks for reading my "Tears"" and the comments. Have a great week. God bless. Love, Annalise