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Abandonment

Humanity may emit a brief chortle. However, he remembers he is a mere mortal. Many of the towns and buildings he has been are desolate and quiet, as they are no longer lived in. There are reminders of tall, untrimmed grass. In window panes, there is broken glass. Fallen leaves are strewn on the ground. Indications of abandonment remain all around. For one reason or another, inhabitants did not stay. They merely packed up their things and went away. A lifeless shell of a village remains today. All signs of human life we can no longer see. Once again, it is nature reigning supremely. Written after seeing a series of photographs.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/4/2012 9:50:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Robert! This is wonderfully written and descriptive but leaving me feeling a little sad. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 3/2/2012 8:12:00 PM
ROBERT
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Date: 3/2/2012 11:17:00 AM
The ebb and flow of progress? Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 3/2/2012 5:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "UPTO SIXTEEN" contest Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/1/2012 8:23:00 PM
xcongrats Robert on a grand win for this deeply profound piece of poetry luv.. sentiments very well expressed..
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Date: 3/1/2012 5:40:00 PM
Robert, You have a wonderful way with words. Good job and congrats on making Brian's winners' list..................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 3/1/2012 4:07:00 PM
Congrats, Bob. Excellent piece. Great job. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 2/20/2011 8:51:00 AM
This is what life/nature is: a continuous movement. I like movements, impelling us all to walk ahead. So kind poem of yours!
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Date: 2/17/2011 6:48:00 PM
Hey Robert, Looks like we had sort of a similar idea about buildings abandoned. Yours is more modern structures while my cabin is a solitary structure from way back. We actually have a large number of such cabins here in North Alabama. Your poem reminds me of "Life After People" a little bit. Good work. Thanks for sharing. Elton
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Date: 2/17/2011 3:24:00 PM
I liked this, great visuals :)
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