Abandonment

Humanity may emit a brief chortle.
However, he remembers he is a mere mortal.
Many of the towns and buildings he has been
are desolate and quiet, as they are no longer lived in.
There are reminders of tall, untrimmed grass.
In window panes, there is broken glass.
Fallen leaves are strewn on the ground.
Indications of abandonment remain all around.
For one reason or another, inhabitants did not stay.
They merely packed up their things and went away.
A lifeless shell of a village remains today.
All signs of human life we can no longer see.
Once again, it is nature reigning supremely.

Written after seeing a series of photographs.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 4, 2012 at 9:50 PM
Congrats on your win, Robert! This is wonderfully written and descriptive but leaving me feeling a little sad. Blessings, Rhonda
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March 2, 2012 at 8:12 PM
ROBERT
Guzzi Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 11:17 AM
The ebb and flow of progress? Congrad's Light & Love
Brown Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 5:58 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "UPTO SIXTEEN" contest Robert. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
March 1, 2012 at 8:23 PM
xcongrats Robert on a grand win for this deeply profound piece of poetry luv.. sentiments very well expressed..
Ronthorpe Avatar
March 1, 2012 at 5:40 PM
Robert, You have a wonderful way with words. Good job and congrats on making Brian's winners' list..................S.Ronthorpe
Taylor Avatar
March 1, 2012 at 4:07 PM
Congrats, Bob. Excellent piece. Great job. Nice going. Ralph
Neto Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 8:51 AM
This is what life/nature is: a continuous movement. I like movements, impelling us all to walk ahead. So kind poem of yours!
Camp Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 6:48 PM
Hey Robert, Looks like we had sort of a similar idea about buildings abandoned. Yours is more modern structures while my cabin is a solitary structure from way back. We actually have a large number of such cabins here in North Alabama. Your poem reminds me of "Life After People" a little bit. Good work. Thanks for sharing. Elton
Anne Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 3:24 PM
I liked this, great visuals :)
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