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"Can you feel the soul of an abandoned house; can you hear the whispering? " Quote by _Constance La France I recall as a boy; I liked to explore scary abandoned houses, back then, I'd let my imagination oversee my adventures. Empty, dilapidated, broken-down houses attracted me. I loved to take exploratory excursions on my own, hoping to experience some ghostly apparitions associated with exploring haunted houses. I felt inexplicably drawn to such places. Enigmatic whispers often startled me and yet, I'd investigate every room, forcing myself to keep on going. Old ruins often frightened me, but that is what I wanted. Fright; stimulated my sense of mystery. These innocent intrusions offered thrills. (Melting Snowball) 05/27/2023 Writing Challenge - C Quotes Sponsored by: Constance La France (How Many Syllables) Melting Snowball A form in which you steadily decrease the number of letters or syllables per word or line or the number of words per line. Any number of lines are allowed. No meter or rhyme is required. ( from 18 down to 1 syllable)

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Date: 6/7/2023 5:02:00 PM
Your words and presentation are beautiful Congratulations!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/8/2023 6:33:00 AM
Thanks, Ann; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/6/2023 5:28:00 AM
- Hello Emile ... back with a congratulations :) - hugs
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Date: 6/6/2023 8:37:00 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise; I appreciate it, my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/6/2023 4:07:00 AM
Congratulations on this winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/6/2023 8:38:00 AM
Thanks, Sara; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/3/2023 6:55:00 PM
Emile, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations and well done !
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/4/2023 8:14:00 AM
Thanks, Constance; I appreciate the placement and your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/29/2023 3:45:00 PM
Hello Emile, oh, you are brave. I would nevr go into an abandoned building alone. It would be scary. So you are brave. My friend., enjoy your evening. /Darlene\
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/30/2023 10:18:00 AM
Hello Emile, Yes old houses can be scary. I wonder what they looked like before they got older. Your welcome my dear friend./Darlene\
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/30/2023 7:44:00 AM
Thanks, Darlene; old houses can be scary, but that is what makes them interesting to explore, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/27/2023 2:29:00 PM
Old ruins are exciting, Emile :) - A great poem for the contest (I chose the same Quote ... will post it later this weekend :) - Best wishes in the contest - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/27/2023 6:18:00 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise; I appreciate your comments, good luck with the contest my friend, Emile.

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