Abandoned

Their mother lay dead
     in the middle of the road.
   The car carried on.

   The sun rose distressed.
     The youngsters were on their own.
   Both parents now dead.

   The orphans were cold
     and huddled together.
   Alone, abandoned.

   Hunger pangs grew.
     The weakest one cried out and
   the others shivered.

   Black hearted Raven
     Found the unguarded nest
   and did his evil deed.

   Watching in horror
     a sparrow sobbed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 4:47 PM
Here is one I had seen before. So sad.
Pettit Avatar
January 22, 2014 at 5:52 PM
Good write, but a sad one.
Dietrich Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 9:55 AM
wow, that last line really captures the sad essence of this poem. Love this one.
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