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Abandoned

Their mother lay dead in the middle of the road. The car carried on. The sun rose distressed. The youngsters were on their own. Both parents now dead. The orphans were cold and huddled together. Alone, abandoned. Hunger pangs grew. The weakest one cried out and the others shivered. Black hearted Raven Found the unguarded nest and did his evil deed. Watching in horror a sparrow sobbed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/22/2014 4:47:00 PM
Here is one I had seen before. So sad.
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Date: 1/22/2014 5:52:00 PM
Good write, but a sad one.
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Date: 11/9/2013 9:55:00 AM
wow, that last line really captures the sad essence of this poem. Love this one.
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