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Abandoned

The vacant house in the woods Rumored to be haunted and cursed Many try to find it to rob its goods A house thought to have an evil thirst Two teenage boys disappeared years ago Lost in the woods near the dilapidated place They left one late night so no one would know Searches found nothing but reports of a ghostly face No one has been able to find the house since There was a forest fire after the boys were gone People searched for remnants not convinced Rumored it was recently seen lit up before dawn The locals tell you to stay away from those woods They believe an evil force lurks there and awaits No one has lived to tell or show any of the goods For those who want to pursue it are temping their fates 6/20/2020 Contest: Abandoned Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Date: 6/28/2020 5:01:00 PM
a good and spooky one, tania. I see it's a win. Congratulations, and thanks for my win in your summer haiku contest.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/28/2020 5:50:00 PM
Thank you Andrea for your visit and nice comments and you're welcome on the haiku contest!
Date: 6/26/2020 3:23:00 PM
careful what you wish for for it might just be received....when you play with fire, a burn is always conceived....if you follow a trail of lies, just know, it never ends....and how could you ever want help if your hand never extends....such a compelling story tania....very nicely done....and i sent you a soup mail....;)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/26/2020 6:07:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 6/24/2020 7:27:00 PM
Tania, congratulations on your win in my abandon contest with this wonderfully penned poem, you are a great storyteller _Constance
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/25/2020 5:05:00 AM
Thank you Constance for my placement and comments! :)
Date: 6/23/2020 3:12:00 AM
got to agree with the other comments this is a gripping tale Tania!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/23/2020 5:04:00 AM
Thank you Jan, I have fun writing some dark ones! hugs
Date: 6/22/2020 8:08:00 AM
Gripping storytelling Tania! Congratulations on your win :)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/22/2020 9:56:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 6/20/2020 9:37:00 PM
A creepy write!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/21/2020 8:08:00 AM
Thank you Kim!
Date: 6/20/2020 8:52:00 PM
Not the sort of story to be reading before bed Iol I love poems with a good story embedded in it. Enjoyed this one, good luck. Tom
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/21/2020 8:08:00 AM
Thank you Tom! :)

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