Abandoned

This forsaken house seems haunted
filled with shifting shadowed realms
that change from splayed moonlight
Silent are the steps once taken
through the rusty hinged cobweb-covered doors
that hang like worn-out relics from another time

The only sound is of mice
scurrying across crumpled paper
of bleak reckoning
where memories from its past still live
between broken windows
and torn rain stained wallpaper
where roaches crawl to hide

No one knows when or why it was deserted
as it stands as a monument from long ago
alone on top of a hill, above a stone bridge
covered in brush and thickets

Most have only seen it in daylight

It's now a place the young dare each other
to stay the night
Some say they see figures holding lamps
floating by the windows
before they hear a scream from death's abyss

No one really knows

I peaked into its windows once
Now, I just pass by and stare into its dim-lit world
of yesterday, and wonder


6/14/20
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La France Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 7:38 PM
Frederic, congratulations on your win in my abandon contest with this wonderfully penned poem_Constance
Mishra Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 8:15 AM
Wow! This is a gripping mysterious tale. You excel at storytelling Frederic. Congratulations on your win :)
Labyrinth Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 3:59 AM
This is hauntingly beautiful Parker. I love it. Immensely. Were you the Ghost passing by the window watching the interior figures holding lamps floating by the windows daring the young? A paradox of a story. I love it, very much. x
Krutsinger Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 10:11 PM
The mice and sound of crumpled paper were fantastic touches.
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