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Abandon Love

crimson heart tears fall pride anger hurt fear -- swept clean return . . . love – I plea David Meade 01/04/2014 Live Generously

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Kp Nunez

Date: 10/24/2015 2:42:00 AM

Poking in your closet of poems on a lazy Saturday afternoon and found this, David. Deep introspection here. Love to see a man's perspective written about doing away with the garbage that hinders love. Great write! hugs!

David Meade
Date: 10/27/2015 8:40:00 PM

Hello dear friend, yes, hauling the garbage out is a constant chore. Hope you are well -- wind in the hair chasing the light! Thank-you for your kind visit.

Funom Makama

Date: 4/20/2015 8:36:00 AM

Good work and an unbelievable level of talent shown here. I will definitely come checking more of your work.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/20/2015 5:02:00 AM

- Lovely poem,David - I wish you a beautiful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/6/2015 9:06:00 AM

I am sure Love will hear your plea, after all God is Love!

Constance La France

Date: 2/9/2015 1:12:00 AM

David, your poem captures it completely when the heart is broken and I like the layout and thanks for visiting 'lamenting mother' so happy you saw what I was creating with the spacing and pauses ~~

James Fraser

Date: 1/21/2015 12:48:00 PM

Fine title David, not a door I fancy going through. Love can be a killer, James :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/15/2015 4:21:00 PM

I have found those lovers are best to let go ;) . Light & Love

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/11/2015 11:26:00 PM

Now this, this is deep and beautiful

Paul Callus

Date: 1/10/2015 3:23:00 PM

No doubt, David...love will return after such a heartfelt plea! Looks like the slate has been wiped clean. // paul

David Meade
Date: 1/10/2015 10:07:00 PM

Even after 30 years of marriage . . . I still need to wipe the slate clean . . . thank-you for your time and comment. Much love.

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/8/2015 3:37:00 PM

This poem is good and flows off the tongue like syrup, leaving a bittersweet after taste....delicious! Emile

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/8/2015 8:38:00 AM

A heart filled with emotions of love. What is gone let that be gone. True love cleans the heart and surges. Beautifully done, my lovely friend. 7 i feel here. Loved always my lovely friend,bl

Meg Anderson

Date: 1/7/2015 1:14:00 PM

David, sorrowful... I wish for you that love return to you! Meg

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/6/2015 5:03:00 PM

Sometimes no matter how much we want it there is no guarantee love will be returned by the one we love. The important part is to not close our hearts off. Love can surprise us when we least expect it to.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 1/6/2015 9:29:00 AM

You can pack a wealth of emotion into a small amount of space. This gem sings on a haunting note of sadness.

Tim Smith

Date: 1/6/2015 9:20:00 AM

I hope things work out for you David.. I was in a bad situation 3 years ago and have finally found the light...I pray for you my friend

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/6/2015 8:19:00 AM

Love is all/thanks david. God bless.rajat

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/6/2015 7:05:00 AM

Panacea of all: Love! May it be the permanent resident in your heard my dear friend, David! Excellent work!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/5/2015 11:45:00 PM

Love is the best healer of the heart. Lovely poem you have penned David.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2015 10:40:00 PM

I like this. All those things swept clean. A clean sweep for love to return!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/5/2015 12:15:00 PM

ohh, your sense of longing fills me, david,,, remarkable!.. huggs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/5/2015 11:22:00 AM

Once a heart is swept clean, one needs to fill it with something loving and wondering to keep pain away..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 1/4/2015 10:32:00 PM

David, awesome write, 7 sir Sometimes drastic things have to happen for our eyes to be opened and realize what truly is important, but God is always with us to making things easier. Blessings to you my dear friend of happiness, health, wisdom, and wealth

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 1/4/2015 8:23:00 PM

short poem with the right words intensified by the format wow!! creativity a plus!!! powerful verse!

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 1/4/2015 6:06:00 PM

The meaning of despair is the healing that's there... Nicely done David... Verlena

David Meade
Date: 1/4/2015 6:23:00 PM

Well said Verlena -- I love the way you string your words together -- very lovely.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/4/2015 5:02:00 PM

fears fall but hope things can be patched up - great deep write David:-) Hugs Jan xx

David Meade
Date: 1/4/2015 6:21:00 PM

yes, all is good -- I am just a pig-headed male that needs to be shaken up at times. Hope you are surviving . . .