James Edward Lee Sr. Poet Free verse

Abandon Dwelling Neglected-

Dwelling abandon neglected
Not at all picturesque 
This decaying house
Been condemn now for nineteen months
From the roof to the porch
Harvesting ferns in garden
Overgrown growths wild grasses dandelions
Up the swaying staircase 
Window,door crack and broken a mess
The sun and wind whispers through the downspouts and eves
Condemn and abandon only one on the block sees
This abandon decaying condemn dwelling
While over the yard weeds prostates growing rosette wilds killing
This nonpicturesque abandon neglected decaying dwelling

7/16/20
1st  Place placement in Contest
Decaying House Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Aditi Mishra July 27, 2020 at 4:37 AM This is a heartfelt muse James. Really sad emotions pictured deeply. Congratulations on your win! Blessings :) James Edward Lee Sr. July 27, 2020 at 1:19 PM Thanks for dropping by reading my verse, Aditi... James Write on! :)

Constance La France July 25, 2020 at 9:24 AM James, congratulations on your win in my decaying house contest with this excellent write, a FAV for me _Constance James Edward Lee Sr. July 27, 2020 at 1:22 PM Thanks again for all you do, Constance. And I thank you for my placement in your contest... Write on! : ) ~James

Connie Marcum Wong July 22, 2020 at 5:02 PM A sad picture you have painted with your words James. Excellent! Congratulations on your top win! Blessings xxoo James Edward Lee Sr. July 27, 2020 at 1:24 PM Oh! Thank you so much Connie, Write On. James

William Kelii Kekaula July 22, 2020 at 4:36 PM Simply love this, James, pointedly depicted and my compliments for your win -- Aloha~@William James Edward Lee Sr. July 27, 2020 at 1:25 PM William, thank you my friend

Jan Allison July 19, 2020 at 3:20 PM Dropping back to say many congratulations on your win James :-) hugs Jan xx James Edward Lee Sr. July 27, 2020 at 1:17 PM Guess this is such a shetered verse LOL! Thank you, Jan

Jan Allison July 16, 2020 at 4:49 PM you certainly have given a vivid description of a derelict house James:-) hugs Jan xx James Edward Lee Sr. July 27, 2020 at 1:10 PM Thanks ! Jan Write On.