Abandon

Abandon baby cries daily effortlessly for giving hugs,
idle jealous kisses,
loving mommy nowhere observed,
papers quickly read signed to unite vain woman,
xerox your zest.
Date Written: 2/22/2023
2 Place
Note: Just a write. Not true.
Note: 2 mothers and 1 baby.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 3/4/2023 7:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Paula!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/5/2023 10:03:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like my "Abandon" write. This one was a hard one to write. Have a great day writing away............................
Date: 3/3/2023 1:27:00 PM
Conrats Paula. Sincerely, an outright winner in my eyes.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/5/2023 10:02:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad to see you back again. This was a hard Writing Challenge - A Words and Forms. I must say, your very kind words about this write have made me very happy. "Thanks" Have a great day writing away............................
Date: 3/2/2023 10:21:00 AM
Paula, great work, and many compliments on your win in my Writing Challenge - A Words and Forms. Blessings.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/3/2023 8:42:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like my write. It is an honor to have this win in your Writing Challenge - A Words and Forms. I must say, it was a hard one. My mine almost caught on fire. Thank You for having this contest. Have a great day writing away............................
Date: 2/22/2023 3:43:00 PM
LOUD applause ! I know how hard that was Paula, and you did great. Super ABC entry.(I did one too,) So I really appreciate how terrific your story is. Sincere good luck in the Contest. Don't tell anyone I said this, but I hope all the A-B-C entries win this contest. Cheers Wendy
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/23/2023 2:37:00 PM
Thanks for reading/writing and for your good luck. Glad you like this ABC write. Yes, this ABC is a hard one to write. It would be great if everyone could win. Good Luck with your write. Have a great day writing away............................
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