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Abandon

I shall but ignore* the parching sun
And race with tousles of duskfall's groove,
this free-fall surrender* to unknown escapades...
    Then   weightless like a carefree rhythm
Of  a tide ebbing its murmured sigh--
This final brilliance quiets  my  indulgence,
A riot of pirouttes swinging 
without logic or explanation. I am unperturbed,

Ending a night’s frolic through a beamed trance.


~
For Dear Heart's Contest
Thesaurus - Abandon or Abandoned
*wantonness, ignore, surrender--abandon*  6/17/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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La France Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 7:11 PM
nette, congratulations on your win in my abandon contest with this beautifully penned, and I love your image too _Constance
Mishra Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 7:58 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win Nette. Blessings and love :)
Mcintosh Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 3:19 PM
This is a wonderful write, dear friend. I enjoyed reading and wanted to congratulate you on your so deserved win. Blessings and love sent your way, Gina
Roper Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 12:11 PM
Nette, great write and imagery, congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve
Proxenos Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 11:54 AM
Oh wow Nette, your poetry has always been wow, but I would say this is one of your very best, a fave for me! Blessings, Jennifer.
Cozart Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 11:43 AM
This is lovely, Nette. Well done indeed!
Mishra Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 6:55 AM
This is an instant fave for me! What a mystical verse, untamed, free, artistic. Love to you Nette :)
Bangalee Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 5:15 AM
blended; all are blended in the endless tempo of bohemian dance
Michael Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 5:09 AM
You kept the soul of the write dancing in pure bliss...that is a prayer...Nice one nette
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