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I remember so vividly, ... a breathtaking lush verdure only you and I knew; our no man's land. Our fairytale may have ended but the memories we created there linger on! We walked arm-in-arm amid tufts of grass and tarrying dandelions; unconscious of time. We felt comfortably at home there, a most welcome respite from all the madness of the day! I remember how young we felt running through the wide-open plains chasing butterflies. Good times did roll! We were like children lost in paracosm. Who knows how our haven looks now? Oh, how we used to seize precious moments dancing under the midday sun; It couldn't be more liberating! I wish I could relieve the experiences with you once again! I miss them like drought misses rainfall! Thesaurus - Abandon or Abandoned Poetry Contest (Winner: 2nd Place) Sponsored by A Dear Heart Date Written: 06/14/2020

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Date: 6/24/2020 7:36:00 PM
Edward, congratulation on your win in my abandon contest with this wonderfully penned poem _Constance
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Date: 6/22/2020 8:14:00 AM
Your gorgeous imagery and soothing emotions engulf me in waves of nostalgia dear friend. This is a brilliant write. Congratulations on your win Edward :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/22/2020 1:40:00 PM
Thank you very much for the continued support, Aditi:-) Most obliged.
Date: 6/14/2020 1:47:00 PM
Wonderful write, dear friend. All the best for the contest, Much love and blessings sent your way, Gina
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/22/2020 1:44:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gina:-) Love back at you <3

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