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Abandon

Abandon through the flowing blue ice streams, then rise to thirsty trees and fields of dreams. Abandon in the beige fields of Indian red autumn, skeletal keepers lean from the fragrant ledge then forgotten. Abandon through the weaving champagne sunbeams, stairway to nirvana, most transient gleams. Abandon in golden salamander orange, that hath, set archway of pendulous amber stipule path. Abandon in the summer sky blue waterfall, frond through the echoes, grayish fog call. Abandon in lichen depth and pinnacle spears, bent and rooted in the brown, in deaf ears. Abandon in liquescent hands, in its melancholy vale, slowly unfurl, meeting once more in a dying golden pearl. Reaching for the stars, yet the soul hath life diviner. Let it sooth my bleak sorrow and my ashen sin, a love finer. 6/26/2018

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Date: 8/27/2020 8:16:00 PM
Beautiful Eve. I enjoyed this so much. God bless you
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Date: 4/22/2020 3:38:00 PM
Wonderful how you can express your awe so eloquently for a place that obviously means so much to you. Beautiful, Eve.
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Date: 8/28/2018 12:41:00 AM
Congratulations on win. Love always - V
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Date: 8/26/2018 9:37:00 PM
Back again to congratulate you again for your win again.
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Date: 8/26/2018 4:47:00 PM
Oh, such a beautiful, soothing poem, Eve, that I enjoyed reading with the lovely music playing! A wonderful write that spreads peacefulness! Congratulations on your fine win! Fave! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/25/2018 11:41:00 PM
Lovely, dream-filled poem with the perfect music to match its ethereal quality. Congratulations, Eve, on your placement in the contest.
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Date: 8/25/2018 11:32:00 AM
The words take you to the places. Uniquely said. Congratulations and blessings, Sian.
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Date: 8/25/2018 6:50:00 AM
A wonderful blend of fine poetry, music, and nature. Beautiful, Eve. Congratulations! ...Fran
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Date: 7/27/2018 6:01:00 PM
Back to congratulate you again for your win again! :)
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Date: 7/26/2018 9:17:00 AM
BIG congratulations, my friend for your top shelf win! Well-deserved. Hugs and love. Pandita
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Date: 7/25/2018 4:52:00 PM
Such beautiful poetic thoughts on 'abandon', Eve! Congratulations on your 1st Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/25/2018 9:29:00 AM
A winning most poem Eve, congratulations dear poetess! xomo
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Date: 7/25/2018 8:51:00 AM
Gorgeous, congrats on top spot.
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Date: 7/25/2018 5:03:00 AM
You know I loved this beauty enough to fave it Eve. Congratulations on having this amazing poem honored with first place!
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Date: 7/24/2018 1:03:00 PM
Whew! Excellent, your muse really heated up and primed you pen for this write. I just checked the 100 best new poems, saw you at the VERY top, applauded and clicked on over. This surpasses my expectations and blows me over in such a wonderful way. A WOW, Eve! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 7/24/2018 2:59:00 PM
WoW!! you surprised me ,,, I didn't know.. thank you for letting me know.. Love the avatar, Cay Cay..
Date: 7/22/2018 4:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Eve.. Your rhyme is absolutely divine!! Completely stellar.. Many Blessings!
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Date: 7/17/2018 5:21:00 PM
Written on a higher level, and very well exoressed. Congrats!
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Date: 7/13/2018 6:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Your words simply flow, beautiful!
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Date: 7/13/2018 1:57:00 PM
Eve, delightful music in this one and a enchanting content. Congrats on your first place finish, well penned.
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Date: 7/13/2018 7:40:00 AM
Eve, congratulation on your top win with this beautiful and tranquil write and the music is divine and sublime
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Date: 7/12/2018 7:06:00 PM
Eve, your poem is a breathtaking beauty enlivened with vibrant and vivid imagery that takes this write to another level of excellence. Congratulations on your exquisite win! Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/12/2018 1:11:00 PM
Eve, your brilliant use of color in this exquisite poem makes your imagery so much more beautiful. I love this magnificent poem and am putting it into my Faves! Congratulations my friend on your well deserved top placement! : ) xxoo
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Date: 7/12/2018 12:22:00 PM
Thank you, my friend, for the beautiful blending mixture of printed words and music.
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Date: 7/12/2018 9:54:00 AM
Very nice. Love the descriptive use of color.... Painting with words. CB
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Date: 7/12/2018 9:42:00 AM
Congratulations Eve on your win. Well deserved for a great piece. faux
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