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A Zen Choka

an old alarm clock on the road, rusty ten past ten, mountains ahead, fine art america in the lower right-hand corner, a wasteland, two yellow lines. 11.07.2019 Fives And Sevens Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May Number of the chosen image 4 Syllables Per Line: 5 7 7 5 7 7

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 7/25/2019 9:09:00 AM

Kurt, Excellent allegorical time piece Choka. Though I don't pretend to understand that poetic style. You've represented it well. Congratz on your win, BTW. -Richard

Georgia Kereopa

Date: 7/22/2019 5:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Kurt

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 7/22/2019 10:48:00 AM

Thank you, Georgia)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/22/2019 5:24:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great win, Kurt :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 7/22/2019 10:47:00 AM

Thank you, Sunshine)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/21/2019 3:52:00 PM

A superb analogy of the picture Kurt! I see why this won 1st Place. Congratulations on your most deserving Win! : ) xxoo

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 7/22/2019 10:47:00 AM

Tnanks, Connie)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/21/2019 2:39:00 PM

I see that you did not choke on this choka (Groan). It's really remarkable how well you do with these piece of Americana. I could never in a million years do half as well with Russia-cana! Congrats on your win, my friend! :) gw

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 7/21/2019 3:47:00 PM

Your comment made me choke into my tea) Thank you, Wolf.