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A Young Life Taken

Ruth wasn't more than seventeen, the cutest girl I had ever seen; a drunk driver collided head-on with a Buick Regal at an excessive speed. That intoxicated man had smoked weed... he once was a clean, responsible son. Yesterday her mom was so proud of a boy so mannered and tame, today she's gotten a share of the horrendous shame; he's not aware of the horrifying crash, he continues to laugh; while in the passenger's seat of the other car Ruth bleeds to death. The nearest hospital' ambulance comes within five minute's time, the car radio is still playing that song with perfect rhyme; Ruth's face is covered with blood and pieces of glass, and her mom tries to wipe them off with a towel as white as her dress. She hopes that those paramedics would save her, but she has no pulse,...how heart-wrenching is Ruth's mother despair! Why did he drink irresponsibly, get behind the wheel and enter the opposite lane? Didn't he know that a car is a weapon that often takes the life of an innocent person? " So sorry for my son's negligence and impairment, I will share your deep pain." Will's mom apologizes in an attempt to comfort her while sunlight brings on the dawn.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/9/2010 5:21:00 AM
What a painful experience this is for Ruth's mother. Will's mom may share her pain, but she still has her son. Mothers always seem to shoulder some responsibility for the actions of their children. In this case Will's mother would be well advised to help her son see that driving while under the influence can cause irreperable harm. Powerful write, Andrew. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/9/2010 2:18:00 AM
Very touching story. Cars are really the killing machines
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Date: 5/9/2010 1:29:00 AM
So devastating. Can feel the emotion.
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