Nilima Deb Poet Free verse

A Yellow Shadow

Suddenly a yellow shadow of a silent river
kissed the fragrance of my dreams
and wholeheartedly mumbled around my
crazy eyes of revelations !

The blue breathing of the shadow
disappeared gently into the bubbles of lullaby
sung by the fairy river, 
I never ever heard before.

Two lines still I could remember...............
"open your eyes and be cheer up
a garden of love-bees waiting for your close up" 
And I opened my eyes with all empty sights !

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Paul Callus September 28, 2016 at 1:19 PM What a captivating opening stanza, Nilima! Is it the fragrance of your dreams that I can pleasantly smell! Is it fair that we have to wake up to reality? ~ Regards // paul Nilima Deb September 29, 2016 at 10:57 AM Yup dear Poet..we can't run away from reality.. I often think the reality as a side effect of my dreams....without dreams also we can't face our reality wisely....Thank you so much for your comments dear poet.Regards !

Daver Austin June 30, 2016 at 12:03 PM What a treat for the reader your description of a dream. "Mumbled round my crazy eyes of revelations." You have a marvelous way with words. Love, daver Nilima Deb July 1, 2016 at 12:29 AM thank you poet for your lovely comment and appreciations .