Notes About The Poem

A Year Has Passed

A year has passed since windows draped in gloom
Since heartache's cure impossible to prove
A year since silence reigned within his room
Since hands upon the clock have ceased to move

Two years have passed - when morning bells are rung
Harmonies do not carry to his ear
Two years in muted night, no dawn's begun
Light too far from his eyes, his grief too near

Three years have passed - new leaves now fill the wood
They have brought him flowers from the fields
His raw suffering, still misunderstood
Beneath ice of loss, unbloomed spring yields

Time unmeasured by years and hours spent
Exists as indefinite bereavement.

7/21/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Watt Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 1:04 AM
Grief is no observer of clock or calendar. You have built this depiction of mourning so carefully, year by year to establish that point, with immaculate nature imagery. No relief will come to him from sounds, or dawn, or springtime. Excellent summary couplet on your wonderful sonnet.
Lindley Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 7:58 AM
Beautiful sonnet.. So expressive in the deep depths of sorrows.. A fav...
Faulkner Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 1:48 PM
Thank you, appreciate it!
Wolf Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 7:32 PM
Powerfully written, Michelle. Excellent poesy. Bravo! ~ Gershon
Faulkner Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 2:43 PM
Thank you so much!
Gentry Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 5:56 PM
Congratulations on your win, Michelle. A sad tragic sonnet, well-written, well-thought-out. I like this.
Faulkner Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 12:15 AM
I'm so glad you enjoyed it, Susan!
Roper Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 3:22 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win,Michelle . I enjoyed reading this well written sonnet. Hugs Eve
Faulkner Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 12:10 AM
Thank you so much, Eve!
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 11:31 AM
A poignant understanding of grief in this lovely sonnet Michelle. Congratulations on your deserving win! ; )
Faulkner Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 12:09 AM
Thank you for your kind words, Connie!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 8:58 PM
Beautifully written, Michelle. I can see that you fully understand there is no limit to the length of bereavement and the soul-wrenching sadness of a loss.
Faulkner Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 1:16 PM
Thank you, Caren, much appreciated!
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