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A WRITERs TAT

Remember when the ink, a writer’s tat, like a cobra spiralling ‘round fingers and arms, wielded power. Splotches, balled up, thrown into the basket hoop, flooding the creative canal. Ideas danced like mad flames, charming, rhyming, flipping, flopping, finally happy, no crossing out, neverending editing, feathers flapping, inkwell splattering, until the words must be kept. Eyes the color of dawn, never set. The romance never kept. Captivated by the sea, trees, and wolves. Hair like a cape ‘round the shoulders, as the cold swirls about, as the fire almost goes out. Only then does the poet gather her skirts and wood, and nibble a biscuit, pour herself into bed. Her dreams and nightmares will be channelled into tomorrow’s inkwell. She lives inside a warm womb, in a butterfly's cocoon, in a bear’s hibernation cave. She spins fairytale gold.

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Date: 2/22/2024 10:44:00 AM
Wow. Can I have some of your ink. The passion in this one and the clarity of mind to chose the words to make it jump from the page and capture the audience. Hope you feel really good about this one. Regards David in NZ
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Date: 2/22/2024 8:37:00 AM
Dear Kim, your creative prose is absolutely beautiful. Your artistry shines in the silky threads of "fairytale gold" your weave from straw. Fantastic! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2024 10:25:00 AM
Hugs :) Thank you for “your weave from straw.”
Date: 2/21/2024 4:31:00 PM
Very lovely Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2024 6:48:00 PM
Thank you, Abdullah!
Date: 2/21/2024 12:36:00 PM
A great prose write... so much imagery and heartfelt words in this one..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2024 2:55:00 PM
Thank you! I appreciate you, Silent!
Date: 2/20/2024 8:23:00 PM
She sure is a poet... or, dare I say it, a poetess...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2024 2:55:00 PM
Dare say it ;)
Date: 2/20/2024 6:08:00 PM
A wonderful concept of where a writer's mind journeys. Feeling the excitement of an idea is like a fire igniting in us, only for those words to be tossed away until we find something good enough to keep. Stopping at that point to reward ourselves with a treat. I love, "...pour herself into bed." Often, I'm up with eyes wanting to close, but HAD to get that rhyme perfect before bed! My sleep is seldom a cocoon for very long. For those who do sleep, it would be a place to spin fairytale gold.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2024 2:56:00 PM
Thank you, Lin! Glad you enjoyed the journey!
Date: 2/20/2024 4:36:00 PM
Exquisite, Kim and a delightful read this evening. I enjoyed the smoothness and ease of your flowing imagery. I liked the last verse, especially 'she spins fairytale of gold.' Outstanding. Faving. Enjoy your evening, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2024 2:58:00 PM
Thank you for faving! Have a wonderful evening, Sara!
Date: 2/20/2024 3:39:00 PM
Whoah, Kim... this is absolutely gorgeous. You portrayed writer's tap with such ease, emotion, depth, everything coveted in a writer, <3 Light and love, just me!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2024 2:58:00 PM
Thank you so much, Paige!

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