A Wounded Womb

She was a BARREN woman.
A missing APERTURE in her tubes...
A missing baby in her womb.
With powerless hormones she could only pray..  
Miscarriages meandered her Mother's Day.

Tracking every NUANCE of her monthly cycle..
Her tests failed the Doctor's ATTEST.
The desperate SAGA of darkness...
Her plunge of motherhood was put at rest.

In the dystopia of her impatient sorrow.. 
the PROCLIVITY to hide  that painful shame...
mocked her deep ..down to her MARROW.

Why did God break his promise?
Couldn't He  stop once..her womb from bleeding?
Her sterile days sedated her bliss.
She gathered TEMERITY to feel nothing. 

Time ticked along...forcing it's power...
...........
............

There was.. grinning sounds of "Granny" all around..


Continued the void of vacuum...
The tragedy of the empty room...
Tiny hands ruptured back...
the Wound of the Woman's Womb.



Dated 21st November,2018
Submitted to the 8 Word Challenge No 9 
Sponsor John Hamilton 
PLACED THIRD IN CONTEST
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 9:20 AM
Debjani, I enjoyed reading and great way of the use of the 8 words .It is terrible not to have a child. Congratulations on your win.
Mitra Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 6:17 PM
Thanks a lot Eve for your compliment.
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November 28, 2018 at 9:03 AM
Back with congratulations! :) xomo
Mitra Avatar
November 29, 2018 at 7:54 AM
Yes, Maureen, you sent me a winning wish almost at the instant of posting. Very satisfying to know that you liked the write.
Hamilton Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 9:46 PM
Sorry for the delay in giving congrats Debjani a remarkable write using the given words, congrats on a nice win!
Mitra Avatar
November 29, 2018 at 7:57 AM
Thanks for the contest, and honoring me in the winners list. the words were at first sounding disjoint..but even I enjoyed writing it.
Barden Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 8:12 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in John's 8-word contest, Debjani - this was not an easy challenge, but very rewarding, I think. Blessings to you and yours for a wonderful holiday season! :-) <3
Mitra Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 8:41 PM
Thanks Gregory..I appreciate your sincere support.wish you too a joyous festive time
Warrior Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 7:18 PM
Congrats!!! on your fine win my friend...great entry Debjani...love & light...^WW^
Mitra Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 8:42 PM
Wow!! You always make my day with your prompt words of sincere wishes
Andresen Avatar
November 22, 2018 at 3:31 AM
- A deep touching poem Debjani, great use of these 8 difficult words - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mitra Avatar
November 22, 2018 at 7:56 AM
Feels good to pass on the thoughts .. you are so encouraging always.
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November 21, 2018 at 8:35 AM
Poignant penning! Well done. My best to you in the contest! :) xomo
Mitra Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 10:31 AM
Thanks so much for your wishes.
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