A Worthy Dream

Like most forms coined these days
The “monchielle” relies
On what has passed before:
With but a passing nod
To master’s skill of yore.

Like most forms coined these days
Their rules are rubber reins: 
Iambs described soft-hard
And in naiveté
Their advocates claimed bards.

Like most forms coined these days,
The attention wavers:
Minter’s has things to do.
There’s games to watch, you see:
Commitments to eschew.

Like most forms coined these days,
The “monchielle” does try
To emulate supreme
And lasting craftsmanship.
It is a worthy dream.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Petersen Potter Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 9:04 AM
Wow! Excellent pen Perry! you got it and beautifully done dear friend. Glad that you tried it and I hope that you use it more in many of your future poems. I enjoyed it very much. A 7 for you! Have a very lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
Mcdaid Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 11:50 AM
Thanks again, Dorian. I drew a blank at what I should write about, so did a bit of fun-poking instead at Heinriksen's 'To Write a Monchielle'.
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