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A Worthy Dream

Like most forms coined these days The “monchielle” relies On what has passed before: With but a passing nod To master’s skill of yore. Like most forms coined these days Their rules are rubber reins: Iambs described soft-hard And in naiveté Their advocates claimed bards. Like most forms coined these days, The attention wavers: Minter’s has things to do. There’s games to watch, you see: Commitments to eschew. Like most forms coined these days, The “monchielle” does try To emulate supreme And lasting craftsmanship. It is a worthy dream.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/13/2014 9:04:00 AM
Wow! Excellent pen Perry! you got it and beautifully done dear friend. Glad that you tried it and I hope that you use it more in many of your future poems. I enjoyed it very much. A 7 for you! Have a very lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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Perry Mcdaid
Date: 12/13/2014 11:50:00 AM
Thanks again, Dorian. I drew a blank at what I should write about, so did a bit of fun-poking instead at Heinriksen's 'To Write a Monchielle'.

Book: Shattered Sighs