A World Away

I found your eyes so randomly,
your face did not exist

No waist to place my arms around,
no lips for me to kiss

No hair to lose my fingers in,
nor ear to whisper sweet

No one to hide within my heart,
to fall in love so deep

Your image I saw by happenstance,
a beautiful vision to see

You held me there with just a look,
as you stared back at me

Your eyes, those lips, that lovely face,
my feelings are all for not

For you are more than a world away,
my beauty from Herat


Herat (Herr-Rot) is both an Afghan city and province. Herat City is the capital 
of Herat Province located in the western portion of Afghanistan.

Written in Afghanistan -May 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mckay Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 3:22 AM
So far my favorite. Will take my time to read it often. To best understand.
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
June 14, 2019 at 11:19 AM
Thank You Iris....I will keep it up as long as possible so you can read it at your leisure as much as you want. :^) MC
De Guzman Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 8:26 AM
Dude, this is great. It not only flows beautifully but each word finds its purpose. It's a solid piece and polished well on all angles. Great job
De Guzman Avatar
November 5, 2013 at 3:04 PM
Really? Wow. She must've been a fox!
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 10:08 AM
Hey JC, I appreciate that Brother! This is a favorite of mine...LOL! it's just ashame I have no idea who this young lady was -saw her in passing.... MC
Hendricks Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 10:11 PM
A double 7 to you, MC. Worlds apart, huh? More's the pity. Melt those miles, bruv. Licia :-)
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 10:06 AM
Licia, thanks!!! Double 7s...awww you're way too kind -i very much appreciate it!!! MC
J.T. Avatar
October 14, 2013 at 3:42 AM
This has a real smooth flow which makes it very easy to read. Nicely done
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
October 14, 2013 at 9:23 PM
Hey, as always I appreciate the kind words from you my man!!!! MC
Holmes Avatar
September 23, 2013 at 1:06 AM
Beautiful Read
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
October 14, 2013 at 9:22 PM
Thanks Christina, my new friend!!! MC
Mcdaid Avatar
September 9, 2013 at 3:59 AM
THAT IS AN AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL READ
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
October 14, 2013 at 9:18 PM
Thanks Liam, sorry it took me so long to reply, but I really do appreciate your comment! MC
Merryman Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 7:54 PM
Marquis, Great rhyme and flow! I like this! Thank you for stopping by and commenting on my work. I greatly appreciate it. BTW my son just returned from Afghanistan mid July. He's army and got home a week before his first child was born. Take care, Love, Kim
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
October 14, 2013 at 9:22 PM
Thank you, I know we spoke about your son after your comment here...again Congrats to you! MC
Neels Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 10:18 AM
You write with your heart and soul. I love that ;) I love this poem too ;)
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
October 14, 2013 at 9:21 PM
I try Wilma, I try! Thank you for your comment -you rock! MC
Barton Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 5:54 PM
absolutely gorgeous sentiments here. Hope someday you find what you need GB
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
October 14, 2013 at 9:20 PM
LOL!!! Thanks, maybe one day right!!! MC
Rain Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 3:29 PM
Amazing writing ! Stunned with sheer beauty .
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
October 14, 2013 at 9:19 PM
Thanks Shanity LOL!!!!! MC
Anglesey Avatar
August 23, 2013 at 10:17 PM
It sounds like you left some of your heart in Afghanistan. Lovely expression and vivid images :)
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 9:37 AM
Thanks Karen, though I haven't left yet, still here LOL! MC
Babu Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 6:02 AM
AWESOME........................... MANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 7:50 AM
Thanks Yadhu! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much, hope you get the opportunity to read more, and I'll have to drop in on you as well. MC
Phillips Avatar
August 16, 2013 at 5:11 AM
Nice poem...All wrapped up in your own imagination. Nice use of symbols and imagery. Nice use of personification too.
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
August 16, 2013 at 8:44 PM
Why thank you Christine, I very much appreciate your observation. Feel free to look around more if you wish... MC
Panangad Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 9:15 PM
Again from you a charming touch, well done my brother
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
August 16, 2013 at 8:42 PM
Thanks my man, must stop by and check out your inventory... MC
A   Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 8:07 PM
Marquis, a lovely voice you paint. a soft delicate love from a distance... like the moon... enjoyed... Linda
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
August 16, 2013 at 8:42 PM
Very pretty words PD, thanks Linda talk to you later??? MC
Gabriella Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 2:28 PM
This is a really beautiful piece. So nicely penned. Great work!
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
August 16, 2013 at 8:40 PM
Thanks April, really appreciate it!!! MC
Ellison Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 6:35 AM
Hey my friend... another beautiful charming presentation! Kudos! Have a good one!
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 7:09 AM
As always Mr. Ellison I sincerely appreciate your remarks. I will have to stop by and take in some more of your work sir -and right soon! Thank you! MC
Andresen Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 8:28 AM
- A touching but beautiful poem, Marquis ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 7:11 AM
Thanks Anne, you're always reading and commenting providing bright words of kindness, thank you!!! MC
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