A Work of Art

Expressing passion,
I call my raw emotion;
You call masterpiece.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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L Avatar
April 18, 2009 at 10:20 AM
That is a work of art, that you alone can do, and thanks for your comments
Tugaff Avatar
April 10, 2009 at 10:34 PM
Hi Raul, your " A Work Of Art " is indeed a well crafted work of art. You have displaced once again your work of art a good example of Senryu. Ernilando
Edmonds Avatar
April 5, 2009 at 5:27 PM
Impressive, nice senryu.
Goombi Avatar
April 3, 2009 at 8:37 PM
A true work of art.
Neal Avatar
April 3, 2009 at 8:24 PM
Marvelous. Love E.
Martin Avatar
April 3, 2009 at 7:53 PM
Nice way of saying it, we call masterpiece. Tyler
Strand Avatar
April 2, 2009 at 12:20 AM
Excellent work.Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
George   Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 9:51 PM
Good one! Raul Lainie
Moreno Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 5:59 PM
Nice poem Raul, from raw emotion comes masterful work..............Danielle
Devonshire Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 5:42 PM
Brilliant words and message, Raul. Very thought provoking! Everyone has a different definition of masterpiece, but I dare say this senryu is one. Love, Carolyn
Lopez Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 5:24 PM
We artist are always trying to feed this need to produce art in many forms. somewhere along the line, work appears that was in the right place at the right time. we work for such a time as this !
Gass Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 5:00 PM
Excellent Senryu, Raul! This is a well expressed Work of Art. Love, Robin
Townsend Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 12:44 PM
So modest and humble! Spoken like a true great! Terrific Haiku. Smiles from Lolita
Bilyeu Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 11:31 AM
awsomely done!!! I just love it!!!
Neal Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 10:43 AM
That last line is something else. I like this. DN
Higgins Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 10:35 AM
This haiku is done very well...love all three lines..good work.
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