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A Work of Art

Expressing passion, I call my raw emotion; You call masterpiece.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/18/2009 10:20:00 AM
That is a work of art, that you alone can do, and thanks for your comments
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Date: 4/10/2009 10:34:00 PM
Hi Raul, your " A Work Of Art " is indeed a well crafted work of art. You have displaced once again your work of art a good example of Senryu. Ernilando
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Date: 4/5/2009 5:27:00 PM
Impressive, nice senryu.
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Date: 4/3/2009 8:37:00 PM
A true work of art.
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Date: 4/3/2009 8:24:00 PM
Marvelous. Love E.
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Date: 4/3/2009 7:53:00 PM
Nice way of saying it, we call masterpiece. Tyler
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Date: 4/2/2009 12:20:00 AM
Excellent work.Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 4/1/2009 9:51:00 PM
Good one! Raul Lainie
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Date: 4/1/2009 5:59:00 PM
Nice poem Raul, from raw emotion comes masterful work..............Danielle
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Date: 4/1/2009 5:42:00 PM
Brilliant words and message, Raul. Very thought provoking! Everyone has a different definition of masterpiece, but I dare say this senryu is one. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/1/2009 5:24:00 PM
We artist are always trying to feed this need to produce art in many forms. somewhere along the line, work appears that was in the right place at the right time. we work for such a time as this !
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Date: 4/1/2009 5:00:00 PM
Excellent Senryu, Raul! This is a well expressed Work of Art. Love, Robin
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Date: 4/1/2009 12:44:00 PM
So modest and humble! Spoken like a true great! Terrific Haiku. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 4/1/2009 11:31:00 AM
awsomely done!!! I just love it!!!
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Date: 4/1/2009 10:43:00 AM
That last line is something else. I like this. DN
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Date: 4/1/2009 10:35:00 AM
This haiku is done very well...love all three lines..good work.
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