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A Wordless Sky

If I don't write, I'm doomed to die
and lie beneath a wordless sky
A silent corpse, unseen, unheard
alive yet dead-  is that absurd?

If rhymes don't paint a rainbow hue
and lines don't tempt with taste of dew
If words can't clothe just what I feel
this thing called life must not be real

Without a dose of poetry 
what will become of you and me?
Just members of the walking dead,
we march each one with empty head

A lifeless, joyless, hopeless mass
who try to make the hours pass
Without the ecstasy of rhyme
to be alive is just a crime

For life without the words I write
is dull and drear, like starless night
Like endless, tortured misery
is life without my poetry

Eileen Manassian
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Lamoureux Avatar
June 2, 2019 at 12:06 PM
I see this beauty has Garnered more praise since last I read it. Well deserved recognition. Hugs Rick.
Mcconnell Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 3:08 AM
Such a great piece Eileen, love your rhyme and flow so eloquently! Like me, you're a lover of rhyme, more power to your pen!, Blessings, Gordon
Juman Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 12:52 PM
God so love the world He created Man. Life is of love write it all. Excellent
Jones Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 2:46 AM
I share your sentiments regarding poetry. I get very depressed if I'm not writing poetry. Great poem !
Lawrence Avatar
June 28, 2018 at 1:25 PM
Well done, Poetess! I'll follow you.
Chakrabarty Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 7:14 AM
It should be the signature song for the PS poets. Hugs.
Donnelly Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 9:42 AM
Many a poet can relate with this fine piece of poetry, Eileen, including myself, except I feel like this about being creative in general, particularly art, writing/poetry, and music. Congrats on being chosen POTD. All the best to you. :) ~ Artsie
Lindley Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 9:52 AM
Such gleaming artistry my good friend. Your poetry always sings its beauty and excellent when read! Never inferior, always superior*, glowing from a true poet's heart*, inked in poetry's shining gems*, setting brilliant authoress author apart* A fav....
Man Avatar
June 12, 2018 at 10:03 PM
Velvet Princess.. many congrats on your well deserved POTD!!
Manassian Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 2:22 AM
Thank you, Chance. Good to have you come around.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 8:25 PM
Your lovely poem is truly a poets poem Eileen. You speak for many of us in this eloquent poem that shines a bright light on the art of poetry! I love it and it is going into my faves! Congratulations on having it honored for POTD! It is very deserving of the honor! : )
Manassian Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 1:50 AM
Thank you, dear Connie. I'm honored that you would fav this. Sending hugs your way, dear.
Roper Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 8:18 PM
I love how you weave your words to paint a masterpiece... belated congratulations on POTD..hugs eve
Manassian Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 1:52 AM
Thank you for passing by, my dear. Your visits are always welcome. Hugs.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 9:38 AM
Back to read some of the great comments. Hugs Rick
Manassian Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 2:23 AM
Thanks for caring enough to do that.
Pett Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 6:05 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved POTD Eileen with your exquisite poem. :))
Manassian Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 2:24 AM
Thank you for the kind words, Roy. Much appreciated.
Allison Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 5:34 AM
Dropping back to say many many congrats on POTD my friend:-) hugs jan xx
Michael Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 3:41 AM
You're right there with the cream of crops...A lovely write indeed...Congratulations...All the best Eileen...
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 5:12 PM
A wow for the voice that spoke my heart! A wow for the words that shaped what is in my mind! A wow for the scent of beauty that captured my soul! You belong to the realm of poetry, words are the very essence, the breath, the voice, the music of the soul, mind and heart! An exquisite piece of heart! A wonderful write, a melodious voice of a passionate poetess! A FAV! Congratulations on POTD! A well deserved acknowledgement! Shine and stay blessed.
Mckeithan Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 4:06 PM
Excellent poem Eileen. If we, as poets, dont or cant write then that could be the "death" of us. Congrats on POTD. Oliver
Smith Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 10:51 AM
Wonderful write Eileen, congratulations on a most deserving POTD honor...
Manassian Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 11:55 AM
Thank you, Charlie. I'm glad you approve of the choice. Blessings.
Ajmal Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 10:30 AM
Can anything be better than this? This is a piece of poetry at it s best, I love reading it, many congratulations on your poem being chosen as a POTD
Manassian Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 11:57 AM
Thank you so much, Faraz, for this lovely comment. It is deeply appreciated. Blessings.
Wanter Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 9:52 AM
Love it, love it, love it! Congratulations!
Manassian Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 12:04 PM
I love love love your post, dear. Thank you for your kindness. :)
Gentile Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 8:21 AM
I absolutely loved your poem, Eileen and congrats on your POTD well done xxoo
Manassian Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 12:06 PM
Thank you for your visit and post, Mike. I appreciate the time it took you to read and comment. Blessings.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 8:01 AM
So pleased to see you honoured with POTD.
Manassian Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 12:09 PM
Awwww...It is the same feeling I get when I see you honored this way. Thank you, my dear.
Messina Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 7:38 AM
Being without poetry, is like a "starless night" great line, Eileen! Love the poem, Congrats on your well deserved POTD...All the best, Charlie
Manassian Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 12:11 PM
Thank you, Charlie. I tried to be a little less bound to cliches...it is sometimes hard, but poetry means so much to me. I appreciate the visit.
Swartz Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 6:50 AM
Great and true words that define a poet. Congratulations on POTD Eileen!
Manassian Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 12:09 PM
Thank you, James. Poetry is my passion...words the air I breathe. Thank you for your visit.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 6:20 AM
Delighted to be back with POTD Congratulations! <3 <3 <3 mo :)
Manassian Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 6:29 AM
Thanks! I'm delighted to have a second visit from you. Hugs <3
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