A Wonderful Show - Nature a Popular Theme Contest

I am sitting here on the sand
Knees bent arms hugging them close
Looking in wonderment at the sky
an artist's hand is painting it's finest work

First a splash of red to lighten the dark sky
followed by  lighter tones of orange
to bring out the nights glow
Then the yellow is applied to raise it up
to the most beautiful sky, a wonderful show

But nature has more to enthral us
Silently wending its way through the nights sky
I see large birds returning home
Their silhouette completes the picture
black shadows against a bevy of fiery hues

I try to remember the tones using my minds eye.
We are so lucky to be able to enjoy such a nightly scene
nature bringing us pictures anew, for us to peruse


Penned 30 May 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 2, 2013 at 11:34 AM
congratulations sass just seen your win xx
Roberts Avatar
June 2, 2013 at 12:52 PM
Thanks Mandy ....Seren
A  Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 2:24 PM
CONGRATS! ;-) ~SKAT~
Roberts Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 2:45 PM
Thanks SKAT....Seren
A   Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 9:49 AM
Seren, Congratulations in Kim M's contest... have yourself a nice one... xox~ LINDA
Roberts Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 1:13 PM
Thank you Linda ..Seren
Richards Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 7:35 PM
So many things we often take for granted......if only we could look with renewed eyes....."pictures anew" as you have written so beautifully!!
Roberts Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 1:12 PM
Thanks Linda ....Seren
Roberts Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 6:25 AM
Thanks Carrie, we dont realise exactly how good our eyes are, they are like in built cameras with memory.. Thanks for the comment... Hope you look at my sketch and write for my contest...Seren
Morrison Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 5:49 PM
Marvelous beautiful piece of work here Seren. Thanks for submitting. Congrats. Kim
Roberts Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 5:59 PM
Thank you so much Kim, lovely contest, ...Seren
Calubiran Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 8:22 PM
Seren, painting with her beautiful words. Should do very well in contest. Good luck
Roberts Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 9:13 PM
Thanks Nato, ....Seren
Richards Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 4:14 PM
If you are not a painter.......you are indeed a painter of poetry! Lovely lovely!!
Roberts Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 9:11 PM
Yes Carrie I do paint, hav you not seen my work? Thanks for your comments.....Seren
Sivey Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 6:43 AM
Wow what a scene you paint with your awesome and glorious words! You have written a fabulous poem my friend! I really enjoyed reading your tremendous piece this morning! You have enlightened me with your splendor from this poem, Great Work!!
Roberts Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 6:51 AM
Thank you Russell ...Seren
Hamilton Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 5:09 AM
a wonderful show indeed Seren beautifully written gl in contest
Roberts Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 6:51 AM
Thank you Linda ...Seren
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