A Woman's Wrath

During the dark dreary cold winter weather
There're times of sunshine and warm rather,
Likewise the moods of a woman you can't trust
Soft as snowflakes at times or cold hard crust.

Hotter than fiercer fire or colder than ice,
Happy or sad - Oh, you'll pay the price!
Placid or provoked, she carries a punch
making the best of us a sore-looking bunch.

Do not step out into this raging storm,
Crawl under the covers and stay warm,
Let the wailing, veering wind pass you by,
Just stay put until you see a clear blue sky.

You may censure me, you can ostracize,
Oh, do review thy lady ere you patronize--
Thus I forewarn the brethren of my ilk,
Fall not for fair face and skin soft as silk.


~A Brian Strand Rhyming Contest.
"When a woman is just a woman" contest by Justin Bordner.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Merryman Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 8:02 PM
Abdul, congrats on your fantastic win! Blessings, Kim M
Mandani Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 7:19 AM
Thanks Kim.
Alex Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 1:56 AM
Likewise the moods of a woman you can't trust - Indeed, very sarcastically put though not very negatively.
Mandani Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 7:20 AM
Thanks.
Cavanaugh Avatar
December 23, 2012 at 5:56 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win Abdul.
Gasun Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 4:28 AM
Congratulations on your super win Abdul! love/hugs,LG
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 2:46 AM
Congratulations on your top spot Abdul, I feel honoured to share it with you, this one is superb xx
Mandani Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 2:48 PM
Thanks a bunch. You hit the spot too! Have a happy holiday.
Liwayway Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 2:32 AM
Congratulations my friend Abdul on your fantastic win. Wishing you a blessed Christmas. Hugs/Love Maria
Mandani Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 2:52 PM
Thanks. You too!
A   Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 8:39 PM
Abdul, 2 perceived opposite meanings when it comes to "FIRE And ICE" :-) Congratulations with your winning poem In , Carol's contest... goodnight~ PD
Roberts Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 7:14 PM
Lol women get moody no wzy..... Haha. Seren
Mandani Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 2:52 PM
Hey Julia Roberts! Thanks.
Roberts Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 7:15 PM
Sorty forgot to say congratulations.
Dietrich Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 4:35 PM
This is an elegant poem on women and their moods. I am not moody at all, but I sure know some women who are! congrats on your fine win.
Mandani Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 2:51 PM
That's great! I thought if you have seen one, you've seen 'em all!! If you are NOT moody, then ... maybe, I need to write a poem on you alone!?
Brown Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 1:46 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest and congratulations on your placement Abdul. Love, Carol
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