Donna Jones Poet Free verse

A Woman's Thoughts

I want to be worth not loosing

The friend you won't let down

The one person you won't lie to, no matter how bad the truth may hurt

I want you to know you hold more, than my heart

You hold my future, my dreams, my tears and my smiles

I want you to know a look is all it takes to be enough

I get scared when I feel insecure, don't get mad, hold me

Trusting you is more important than diamonds and gold

I want to be worth not taking those daring chances

I offer you these things in return without the asking

Only then will I give my full heart in return

©Donna Jones

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Pol Anto August 13, 2013 at 5:15 PM I love writing that exudes emotion , love and vulnerability. This captures all , I hope someone is holding you tightly x Donna Jones August 14, 2013 at 9:28 PM Thanks for stopping Paul...I hope the same for you....life has its ups and many downs

John Loving Iii July 26, 2013 at 12:50 PM i don't usually print other peoples poetry but this i did. because everything you said it was all the same for me. even on trust issues you brought me around. this was a great piece for me personally. it made me feel secure that their was a woman out there like this that i couls make feel this way. i hope you see that with the amount of words i am using that i really liiked this. john Donna Jones July 26, 2013 at 4:36 PM Its so nice to know John....can't tell you how much...can tell you tears were rolling down my cheeks by the time I finished reading this.....that's how much John Loving Iii July 26, 2013 at 12:51 PM added to my favs.

Angel Fire April 22, 2013 at 1:46 PM Written from the deep places, very well put. I hope it is recieved there as well. Angel fire Donna Jones April 22, 2013 at 9:22 PM Thanks...I have friends who are in this place...

Black Eyed Susan April 20, 2013 at 12:51 AM good thoughts I think most of us share... I hope you have found someone who listens to them :) Donna Jones April 22, 2013 at 9:23 PM Best friends...thanks..for taking the time to stop...:-)

Flit Flit April 14, 2013 at 7:27 AM Lovely poem it rings true for men as well thank you Donna Jones April 14, 2013 at 9:01 AM Yes it does!!! Thanks for stopping...Donna

Painted Hunter April 10, 2013 at 8:20 AM A woman's thoughts...I just had to see this one! Its great! Donna Jones April 12, 2013 at 9:37 PM You are sweet....thanks....Donna

Sukmawati Komala April 8, 2013 at 2:13 AM what a fabulous penned... enjoyed so much your beautiful verses..:) <3 much luv and lights <3 Sk Donna Jones April 12, 2013 at 9:38 PM Very appreciated...thank you...Donna

Lucilla Carrillo April 7, 2013 at 11:30 AM Donna; This is beautiful. If only men knew what was in our minds maybe things would be different. Thanks for nsharing..... lucilla Donna Jones April 7, 2013 at 7:25 PM And vise versa I guess....makes the world interesting!!! Thanks for stopping......Donna

David Williams April 7, 2013 at 7:36 AM Donna a good write and I like it but what is life without taking chances?..you'll never know until you try...David Donna Jones April 7, 2013 at 11:11 AM Hey David...thanks for stopping...as for a woman who has been married for 36 of her 53 years I do take those chances....just as the title says...just some thoughts I wish I could get through to my hubby of 22 years sometimes ...

Poet Destroyer A April 6, 2013 at 10:33 PM I love the poem Donna, but mostly i love the women one can be in and out. and thank you for the comment. you said the right thing, at the right moment. always~ PD Donna Jones April 7, 2013 at 11:14 AM Yeah hard to know sometimes ...glad I didn't offend..sometimes I just want someone to tell me its OK to be mad...a while anyway....Donna

... Gigno April 6, 2013 at 2:18 PM !!! Donna Jones April 6, 2013 at 9:36 PM :-) :-) :-) thanks

Ravi Sathasivam April 6, 2013 at 1:34 AM "Trusting you is more important than diamonds and gold.." well said. Beautiful poem. Enjoyed. Tfs Donna Jones April 6, 2013 at 9:28 AM Thank you Ravi...I know infidelity goes both ways, but nice gifts do not heal the hurt and are too often offered thinking they do...I appreciate your time reading my thoughts...Donna ..:-)

Jack Jordan April 5, 2013 at 10:10 PM Beautifully written. Jack Donna Jones April 6, 2013 at 9:29 AM Thank you Jack...very nice to see you here this Saturday morning....Donna

S.Jagathsimhan Nair April 5, 2013 at 3:52 PM Lovely thoughts, nice:) Jag Donna Jones April 5, 2013 at 7:24 PM Thanks Jag...feeling blue today.I guess...Donna

Nigel Fox April 5, 2013 at 3:06 PM Lovely ! But we're only here once, you've got to take risks - life goes on ! Donna Jones April 5, 2013 at 7:34 PM Risks yes but then comes a time you just let pain go on without you...thanks for stopping Donna

Russell Sivey April 5, 2013 at 2:59 PM This is an amazing and charming write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this afternoon! What a powerful statement you have laid out within this clever little piece, Great Work!! Donna Jones April 5, 2013 at 7:34 PM Thanks Russell...appreciate it..Donna