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A Woman's Heart Is a Deep Ocean

I lived a true Romeo and Juliet experience, meeting my love at the art gallery one winter day. I loved art and writing poetry, he liked to draw pictures. My family was considered poor, he was educated, rich, a traveler of the world. My life was mindless with no future until I met him. One evening he took me to a movie, and that movie is forever meaningful to me. The next day he gave me a blue heart-shaped pendant. My very own heart of the sea, I still wear it as a memory. He believed in making each day count, oh, our first kiss- he whispered, trust me. I felt like I was flying, and he said, I will never let go. Then one winter day he crashed his car through ice, a thousand knife's stab my heart forever and ever. If he could talk to me, in that dying breath- he would say, promise me, you will never give up, no matter what. I call his name a thousand times in dreams, and our love will go on and on and on. __________________________________ September 15, 2016 Poetry/Narrative/A Woman's Heart Is A Deep Ocean Copyright Protected, ID 16-829-264-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. The movie inspiration is Titanic For the contest, Movie Mania- Romantic sponsor, Nicola Byrne Sixth Place

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Date: 10/5/2016 1:43:00 AM
Hi BW, This is such a sad piece. Titanic is one of my all time favorite romantic movies. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 9/16/2016 5:43:00 PM
Wow I had a lump in my throat reading this piece.
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Date: 9/16/2016 12:41:00 AM
Vivid and real words that chill Constance. I am sure this outstanding piece will score big! It is awesome! : ) 7
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Date: 9/15/2016 8:39:00 PM
The title captured me, as it is a truth, the poem overwhelmed me for its touching romance and bitter sadness..good luck, this will do well in the contest
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Date: 9/15/2016 6:30:00 PM
Oh Broken Wings! very romantic and said with such loving ease..good luck lovely lady :)-luloo
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Date: 9/15/2016 5:24:00 PM
Beautiful, dear. I see it is inspired by a contest theme. It seems so real and so full of emotions. What a tragedy to lose that kind of love. Good luck in the contest. Hugs
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