A Womans Gift

She laughed as softly  as if she sighed
Her smile revealed things only I could see
My love and joy swelled up untill I cried
I wondered  though would she ever love me

Her smile revealed things only I could see
Now would I tell her of the things I thought
I wondered though would she ever love me
What is this feeling that has made me taut

Now would I tell her of  the things I thought
All other food but  love I'd surely spare
What is this feeling that has made me taut
My life I'd gently give to her  with care

All other food but love I'd surely spare
Then I would be hers and she would be mine
My life I'd gently give to her with care
I'd love her dearly throughout time

Then I  would be hers and she would be mine
A life together we would have to build
I'd love her dearly throughout time
I'd be her love, companion and her shield

A life together we would have to build 
My love and joy swelled up until I cried
I'd be her love,companion and her shield
She laughed as softly as if she sighed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Marcum Wong Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 4:09 AM
This poem is very beautiful Charles. Congratulations on having it featured! #7. ; )
Seymour Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 6:18 AM
Rather heartwarming, good one!
Mcconnell Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 8:39 AM
fine piece indeed Charles, lovely loving gem!
Kimathi Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 7:35 AM
Greetings Charles. Congrats for having your beautifl work featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!!! ;-)
A  Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 12:50 PM
CHARLES, CONGRATULATIONS on your nice win. ~SKAT~
Negron Flores Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 10:28 AM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Charles.
A   Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 6:06 PM
CHAELES. Congratulations on your XOOL flirting poetic win. Love LINDA"
Carter Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 8:48 AM
Congrats on your flirt poem win!
Wigley Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 9:30 PM
sorry, Charles, for the typo. Viv
Wigley Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 9:30 PM
A lovely write, Chalres, very well done. Regards, Viv
Allison Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 2:44 PM
Dropping back with my congrats again Charles:-) Hugs Jan xx
A  Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 2:39 PM
CHARLES, congratulations on your flirtatious win. SKAT LOVE
Nance Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 2:11 PM
Thoughtful write, nicely done :)
Allison Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 6:11 PM
very beautifully penned many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Yvonne Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 8:35 AM
Charles Congratulations on your titled win, the best of all wins. This poem is a fav for me.
A   Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 12:43 AM
CHARLES, Congratulations!!! Thank you for supporting my contest. Sorry, it took this long to post the winning poems. Stop by my latest blog "A Woman's Gift" if you'd like. Enjoy life and the Holidays. :) Always ~LINDA~
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