A Woman In the News

From her garage, with no delay,
she started to back out one day,
not seeing in her own driveway
a child at play; a child at play.

One moment cannot be rewound.
She’d never heard a single sound
but felt the impact; on the ground
her son she found; her son she found.

We should not judge her for the sake
of mercy since her grave mistake
must place on her - guilt hard to take,
A lifelong ache, a lifelong ache.


For the Monotetra Poetry Contest of Kim Merryman
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Babcock Avatar
July 24, 2013 at 8:42 PM
Andrea that is my worst nightmare is someone backing over a kid. My daughter in law backed into their car and she knew it was there but just was not thinking. I could not image the lifetime of regret for one moment of error. Hits the heart this sad poem. love phyl
Anglesey Avatar
July 12, 2013 at 6:19 PM
Andrea, just as moving the second time around. Congratulations on your win :)
Haick Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 9:06 PM
Congratulations on a deserving win, Andrea! Always, Annalise
A   Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 9:40 PM
Congrats In Kim's "Monotetra" contest....take care...LINDA
May Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 5:48 PM
congrats on great win Andrea
Zerbst Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 3:10 PM
Hmm.. Another sad monotetra. Something going on here. Amazing poem! This stuff is impeccable! ~ The contest you were asking about was one for Christmas carols, only using the title of a well known song, and a Christmas theme. Kim Merryman was sponsor for that one also. She always has good contest ideas.
Johnson Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 11:57 AM
And even sadder than the one before because of the guilt. It wouid be unbearable. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Merryman Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 11:43 AM
Such a tragedy! Sadly this happens too often. You captured the tragedy well in this poem. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Guzzi Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 11:25 AM
sigh, lots of us seem in a blue mood!Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Duncan Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 1:29 PM
nicely done Andrea,,,, I've read on this subject or seen on TV a few times SAD. I think we should read older ones or should I say " all" of a persons work ;}
Horne Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 2:57 PM
sad but excellent write - this happened in Plymouth a while ago, the little boy died in hospital
Maverick Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 2:53 PM
I think to write anything like this...I don't even wish to think about writing on this sort of thing; 'however Andrea' you have created a powerful scene Here.' yours Joe.)
Macfarlane Avatar
June 27, 2013 at 6:57 PM
You expressed the raw emotion a tragedy like this brings, made my heart hurt. Excellent write my dear. Hugs
Undertaker Avatar
June 26, 2013 at 7:39 AM
Hi Andrea! so tragic. excellent write.all the best for the contest.
May Avatar
June 26, 2013 at 7:34 AM
I have read about some of these devasting accidents....very heartbreaking...
Anglesey Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 7:42 PM
Hi Andrea, so many of these tragic circumstances suffered by terrible accidents. Lovely poetry form :)
Seal Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 6:46 PM
I love the way you've written this. I remember reading of a similar incident when I was young and too many since. A very sensitive write Andrea on such a sad tale. Take care, Richard
Carrillo Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 5:29 PM
Hi Andrea; This is so sad, but things like this happen all the time. I once knew a mother that her baby boy drowned in the tub - while she went to answer the dood bell. He was one year old. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla
Johnson Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 11:06 AM
Thank you for your friendship, it truly feeds my soul. Lifes not as bad as I make it sound. That's just the way I roll. :)
Johnson Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 11:00 AM
Tradgedy's a tick away, it could happen to us all. My heart is breaking for this soul. May she rise up from this fall. Beautiful monorhyme Andrea. It certainly leaves the reader with an ache in their heart. Prayers.
Devnath  Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 9:58 AM
Sad news is wonderfully worded. It's very deeply rooted in to heart. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
Raj Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 9:49 AM
Many men are thus misjudges, as we neglect the guilt they carry thereafter!!! Smooth written and Impressive.............:):):):):):)Adarsh..
Hunter Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 9:48 AM
I can't imagine...wow. I wanted to stop in and say hi. I've been too busy to do anything with my PM yet but I'll have some free time soon I hope....gotta run. Take care, Andrea....Caleb....Oh, and I WISH i was camping!
Candor Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 9:30 AM
very sad yet very beautifully composed poem
Lamoureux Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 8:01 AM
Good morning Andrea, I hope you are having a great day
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