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A Woman In Rage

As she walks in a street, all we see is a sweet creature that is vulnerable to a man who finds her adorable. "I Love You", a man says to her. "Do not have any taint of fear". A time may come when scorn becomes the order of the day; a dark period when One becomes two people, without a ray of hope for their souls to rejoin. A feminine figure of an ocean wave then turns to storms and torrents that can never cave inside her burning soul; scars, resentments, wounds, and silence scream out! Dressed in black, she resolves to mark her lover out of existence, with or without conscience... Date: 28/02/2015

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Date: 3/8/2015 5:09:00 AM
I sure will have a lovely weekend... :) psst... I bet you miss me, commenting your replies... :) Thank you by the way... LINDA
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/9/2015 4:07:00 AM
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Date: 3/6/2015 2:56:00 AM
Teddy, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/7/2015 8:01:00 AM
Thank you so much Linda! Have a lovely weekend! ^_^
Date: 3/5/2015 12:01:00 PM
Very well penned teddy Many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/5/2015 11:37:00 PM
Thanks Jan! ^_^
Date: 3/5/2015 7:10:00 AM
deep poem Teddy congrats on 4th place hugs
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/5/2015 9:41:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind applause Shadow! ^_^
Date: 2/28/2015 5:41:00 AM
- A woman who is deeply hurt, not open for love - A deep and well written poem Teddy! - I wish you a great weekend :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/2/2015 5:01:00 AM
Thank you for enjoying my piece Anne Lise! ^_^ Sorry, I opened my account just today. Lol. Have a great week! ^_^

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