A Woman In Rage

As she walks in a street,
all we see is a sweet
creature that is vulnerable
to a man who finds her adorable.

"I Love You", a man says to her.
"Do not have any taint of fear".

A time may come when scorn
becomes the order of the day;
a dark period when One
becomes two people, without a ray
of hope for their souls to rejoin.

A feminine figure of an ocean wave
then turns to storms and torrents
that can never cave
inside her burning soul; scars, resentments,
wounds, and silence scream out!

Dressed in black,
she resolves to mark
her lover out of existence,
with or without conscience...



Date: 28/02/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A   Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 5:09 AM
I sure will have a lovely weekend... :) psst... I bet you miss me, commenting your replies... :) Thank you by the way... LINDA
Kimathi Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 4:07 AM
^_^**********************
A   Avatar
March 6, 2015 at 2:56 AM
Teddy, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
Kimathi Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 8:01 AM
Thank you so much Linda! Have a lovely weekend! ^_^
Allison Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 12:01 PM
Very well penned teddy Many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
Kimathi Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 11:37 PM
Thanks Jan! ^_^
Hamilton Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 7:10 AM
deep poem Teddy congrats on 4th place hugs
Kimathi Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 9:41 AM
Thank you so much for your kind applause Shadow! ^_^
Andresen Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 5:41 AM
- A woman who is deeply hurt, not open for love - A deep and well written poem Teddy! - I wish you a great weekend :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Kimathi Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 5:01 AM
Thank you for enjoying my piece Anne Lise! ^_^ Sorry, I opened my account just today. Lol. Have a great week! ^_^
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