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A Wish From the Heart

 I wish 
I wish I could tear down that armoured wall that you've built, 
so I can try to repair,
the gaping hole in your heart.

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Katlin Bouse

Date: 1/12/2025 12:27:00 AM

The armour is needed.

Quoth Theraven
Date: 1/23/2025 11:50:00 PM

I know. The same for me all those years ago. -R

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/16/2021 7:08:00 AM

I also, love to go to one's first post, Richard, this is so good for the take off. love it. Harry

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/28/2020 7:10:00 AM

Hi Richard, this is a sad first write but such good imagery. Very creative. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Eve Roper

Date: 2/9/2020 7:51:00 PM

Love the imagery, shows the pain

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/12/2019 7:13:00 PM

I really like this. I see it was your very first post! May you write many many more.

Quoth Theraven
Date: 8/24/2025 9:11:00 AM

Andrea, Thanks for reading, and just being there for all of us. Happy Sunday to a fast friend and favorite poet. -Richard

Silent One

Date: 11/4/2019 1:50:00 PM

My life story... wanted to see your first poem... has she dropped her mask?

Quoth Theraven
Date: 12/13/2020 9:49:00 AM

SO, This comment so prophetic in light of the times. -R

Elaine Perrin

Date: 10/20/2019 1:24:00 PM

A great first poem :-) x

Quoth Theraven
Date: 10/20/2019 10:23:00 PM

Thanks Elaine. Hope your Sunday was good. -Richard

Brenda Chiri

Date: 8/30/2019 2:06:00 PM

Ah Richard I hope you don't mind but I love to go to the poets beginings do to speak and see how far you've come!but it seems you always were talented huh!;). Have a great weekend!;)

Quoth Theraven
Date: 10/20/2019 10:24:00 PM

Brenda, Thanks for the comment. Here's to all new beginnings. -Richard

Tara Dawn

Date: 8/17/2019 11:53:00 PM

????????

Quoth Theraven
Date: 8/18/2019 12:00:00 AM

Tara, Thanks for dropping by. -Richard

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/24/2018 8:47:00 AM

Well expressed Richard! Welcome to the Soup.

Quoth Theraven
Date: 10/27/2018 1:05:00 AM

Thank you Richard... -from Richard

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/8/2018 8:45:00 PM

Wow - awesome first poem posted, Quoth. Welcome to PoetrySoup.

Samuel Otieng

Date: 10/7/2018 7:08:00 AM

Lovely write.

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/6/2018 4:08:00 AM

Welcome to soup. This is a very kind poem. Nice!

Quoth Theraven
Date: 4/16/2021 8:50:00 PM

Hello Heidi..So glad this comment was from you. Sorry I took so long to say 'hello'. I wish to make it up with a thousand hellos and no goodbyes. Not good at saying them. -Richard

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