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A Wisdom Download

We are travelers on this wild terrain Heading timorously towards an unknown goal Ever tossed by the vicissitudes of life Fated to partake evenly of smiles and tears All the paths we tread along Finally converge on a single spot At the tomb, we just pause awhile To resume our journey to lands beyond From the experience I have with life I am able to download the great wisdom, That all what counts is how well we live And not how long we have been here. So, mend your life as your conscience directs. Bridge the gap between words and deeds. Believe your heart knows what is best It will show the route you should take Faith and Hope together brightens life But love is the magic key opening every heart! April. 16. 2023 A Wisdom Download Poetry Contest Sponsor- Unseeking Seeker

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Beata Agustin

Date: 4/24/2023 8:36:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your wisdom-filled muse. I agree to this wise assertion of yours:"That all what counts is how well we live And not how long we have been here." God bless you.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/24/2023 11:18:00 AM

Amen dear Valsa! "Bridge the gap between words and deeds!" What wonderful wisdom dear friend! Your "download" overflows with gems of wisdom from your wise and compassionate heart. I will enjoy savoring your sweet wise words over and over! Congratulations on your win! So wonderful to share the podium with you! Blessings sweet friend!

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/24/2023 9:45:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your outstanding contest win, Valsa. I'm sorry I couldn't follow your wonderful poems; I'm traveling and my time on here is limited.

Suzette Richards

Date: 4/24/2023 8:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement, Valsa.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/16/2023 3:10:00 PM

So, mend your life as your conscience directs. Bridge the gap between words and deeds. Believe your heart knows what is best--words of wisdom throughout, Valsa. Meaningful write from your gifted pen.

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/16/2023 11:49:00 AM

So sweet, friendly, and deep dear, Valsa. I really enjoyed the style in which you frame things. Your lovely poetry contains a wealth of wisdom, and I can feel it downloading as I read it. "All the paths we tread along Finally converge on a single spot" I believe that is what all of us are searching for—simple joys and pure moments in time.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/16/2023 11:41:00 AM

From the experience I have with life I am able to download the great wisdom…which helps the younger or less experienced. God bless you, Valsa!

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/16/2023 10:38:00 AM

Definitely a wisdom download, Valsa. A poem that should be read at the beginning of every day:)