A Wintry Dawn

Woke up to a cold and wintry morn,
No blue sky, just a threatening dawn.
Clouds are low and a dirty grey,
Look full of rain ready to cascade today.
No sun to see to give us mirth,
Waiting for the deluge to water the earth.
Then, as I watched, to my delight,
The sun burst though, shining bright.
The clouds dispersed as the sun shone down,
Wiping away the mornings frown.

Another nice day in Cyprus.

© Dave Timperley 13/12/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 12/20/2018 7:44:00 AM
- A great winter picture, Dave :) - A little greeting to you from Norway - I wish you a peaceful and beautiful Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Dave Timperley
Date: 12/20/2018 12:52:00 PM
Ah, Thank you Anne-Lise, lovely to hear from you. Here in Cyprus we do not take to well to the cold weather, even though it is mainly at night. Take care, and have a wonderfully delicious Christmas. God Bless. D.
Date: 12/13/2018 5:59:00 PM
Hello Dave, I do like this poem. When the snow covers the empty trees it looks beautiful. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/15/2018 6:35:00 PM
Hello Dave I am also a summer person,born in winter. We are having Spring thaw. right now.Have a nice eveningmy friend.
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Dave Timperley
Date: 12/14/2018 9:19:00 AM
No snow here Darlene, just gets a little cold[15 degrees which is cold for us] But weather can change dramatically through winter. I'm a summer person. Thanks for your comments. God Bless. D.
Date: 12/13/2018 3:01:00 PM
I enjoyed this. What a great ending! Very nice :)
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Dave Timperley
Date: 12/14/2018 9:21:00 AM
Went from one extreme to the other yesterday Heidi. As long as it rains at night is OK by me. Thanks for stopping by. God Bless. D.
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