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A Winter’s Gem

In the wee hours before the sun rises on this Winter’s morn, With gentle grace twirling through crisp cold air, I saw the arrival of the first burst of snowflakes of the year, In the garden, every leaf they adorn. Delicate patterns intertwine like ribbons of white lace, Fluttering and spinning in a dance so pure and full of grace, Snowflakes are one of Winter’s most beautiful gems, These fleeting moments of joy can only be seen as they leave no trace. Each flake, a little dancer, unique in its way, With a slight touch of the sun’s ray, they sadly melt away, Life is short, and like the snowflakes that fall, Let’s lose ourselves in this magic and swirl with the flakes, as each moment is a miracle and a gift to us all. By Zyrool

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Date: 12/15/2024 12:08:00 AM
Hello Zyrool, I enjoyed your poem. This made me think about the beauty and charm of winter and how our heart feels so warm in winter because of its beauty. "Let's lose ourselves in this magic and swirl with the flakes, as each moment is a miracle and gift to us." I genuinely appreciate these words. Winter is so precious!!
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 12/15/2024 12:32:00 AM
Thank you Anika for the read and your lovely words. I am glad you enjoyed reading it. Each season has its own uniqueness only a few will notice them. Wishing you a great time over the Christmas holiday period. Stay Blessed, my friend.
Date: 11/26/2024 12:14:00 PM
Dance on, Zyrool, in snowfall magic and miracles! I so enjoyed this delightful "gem!" Thank you for sharing it. Still smiling! Be blessed, safe and warm!
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 11/26/2024 2:35:00 PM
Hello Sam, glad you enjoyed it, I do love watching the snow falling there’s something magical about it. Thank you for dropping by. Wishing you a happy Thanksgiving weekend, my friend.
Date: 11/26/2024 2:39:00 AM
Your poem captures the beauty of first snow. I feel the excitement of the outdoors in winter.
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Date: 11/26/2024 8:41:00 AM
Hello Hilda I always look forward to the first snow fall of the year, as for me it purifies. Thank you for the read. Wishing you a very happy Thanksgiving weekend, my friend. Stay Blessed.
Date: 11/25/2024 9:43:00 PM
Yes, each moment is like a falling flake of snow delighting our glance for a moment but melts away with sun rise. Life too is fleeting like snowflakes. So try to enjoy every moment that we get. The first winter snow is beautifully described. Zyrool, enjoyed your lovely description.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 11/25/2024 11:49:00 PM
Thank you for dropping by, Valsa. Much appreciated. Have a wonderful rest of the week, my friend.
Date: 11/25/2024 5:04:00 AM
Ahh!! I like this one. Snow falling does have a special feel to it. Where I live, we don't get snow very often. Maybe every ten years or so. There is such a silence when it falls and only the sound of the snow falling is heard. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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Date: 11/25/2024 6:20:00 AM
Hello Sara, I am so glad you liked it, thank you so much. I guess not having snow is a good thing, as you haven’t got to worry about the high heating cost. :) since I became ill with arthritis I can’t bear the cold. Wishing you a fabulous new week ahead and a wonderful Thanksgiving weekend, my friend.

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