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A Winter's Ball

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                                            rhythmic wind whispers 
                                   parched leaves waltzing gracefully
                                              under the full moon

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Akash Ripper

Date: 4/17/2014 1:56:00 PM

quite nice piece

Savannah Rose Harper

Date: 9/20/2011 5:12:00 PM

Wow! Been a while since ive commented anything, so I figured why not comment on something amazing! Great job!

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/12/2011 7:35:00 PM

Stopped by to check out this haiku, I can't believe I missed this one.

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/29/2011 8:45:00 AM

Hello dear Abe!How happy I was to hear from you, and to see you posting one of your beautiful poems!(Love this one!)..I am doing fine, and how is your lovely family? I know you are busy, as any teacher could be..sure miss seeing some of my old friends on the soup..but it cheered my day to see your name yesterday!Let me hear how it's going, and my best to you and your family! Tell Caleb howdy!! :)Bet he is as tall now as Will, who will soon be taller than me!!! Oh,and tell Raul hello for me too!

Elaine George

Date: 1/28/2011 9:10:00 AM

What a beautiful picture you have painted with this Haiku, Abe. Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/28/2011 7:07:00 AM

Stopping by to say hello and let you I enjoyed reading your poetry today Abe. I am in the process of packing up to move in a couple weeks so not much time for one on one. I will be stopping by when I can. Have a wonderful weekend and keep your pen flowing. Love and blessings, Carol