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It was nine degrees out all was frozen Not much better inside for commode water Icy crystals formed not what we'd chosen Shaking at fireplace's front, stood our daughter On top of the hearth wasn't any better One thing we didn't need was a fly swatter Outside with slick cardboard and snow saucer The children did laugh and gingerly play With warm cocoa sipped, slept like a dosser Snuggled upon dry straw and cow's loose hay They could have slept through loudest donkey's bray That experience made for a good day Winter wonderlands don't happen much here Usually cold, wet, and windy each year Sometimes with ice spewed then bugs disappear So that winter wonderland brought us cheer Lots of wet clothes and needed headgear Once we relaxed and to rules didn't adhere Each family needs one winter wonderland With cocoa and popcorn in dixieland Written: December 27, 2018 For Contest: Winter Wonderland Poetry Contest Sponsor: Emile Pinet

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Date: 2/3/2023 8:14:00 PM
Beautiful description of a winter wonderland, dear Sara ! "One thing we didn't need was a fly swatter"..... Quite true. I like it. The one advantage of winter is that there won't be any flies or bugs!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/4/2023 4:21:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa. We don't see many bugs in winter but sometimes on a warm day in the heart of winter there will be a fly or a wasp out flying around. Thanks for the visit. Sara
Date: 12/28/2018 12:51:00 PM
No snow in Liverpool this Christmas, great festive writing. May You have a Happy new year. Stu
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/28/2018 3:34:00 PM
Stuart, Is that good or bad not to have snow in Liverpool? Thanks for dropping by. I appreciate the kind review. We haven't had snow here just two or three or four heavy frost. Sara
Date: 12/27/2018 8:05:00 PM
Great description of a winter wonderland. Inspiring.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/28/2018 6:41:00 AM
Frank, Thanks for your kind review of my work. I appreciate you stopping by. Sara

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