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A Winter Wonderland

It was nine degrees out all was frozen
Not much better inside for commode water
Icy crystals formed not what we'd chosen 
Shaking at fireplace's front, stood our daughter
On top of the hearth wasn't any better
One thing we didn't need was a fly swatter

Outside with slick cardboard and snow saucer
The children did laugh and gingerly play
With warm cocoa sipped, slept like a dosser
Snuggled upon dry straw and cow's loose hay
They could have slept through loudest donkey's bray
That experience made for a good day

Winter wonderlands don't happen much here
Usually cold, wet, and windy each year
Sometimes with ice spewed then bugs disappear
So that winter wonderland brought us cheer
Lots of wet clothes and needed headgear
Once we relaxed and to rules didn't adhere

Each family needs one winter wonderland
With cocoa and popcorn in dixieland

Written: December 27, 2018
For Contest: Winter Wonderland Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Emile Pinet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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George Avatar
February 3, 2023 at 8:14 PM
Beautiful description of a winter wonderland, dear Sara ! "One thing we didn't need was a fly swatter"..... Quite true. I like it. The one advantage of winter is that there won't be any flies or bugs!
Kendrick Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 4:21 AM
Thank you, Valsa. We don't see many bugs in winter but sometimes on a warm day in the heart of winter there will be a fly or a wasp out flying around. Thanks for the visit. Sara
Rose Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 12:51 PM
No snow in Liverpool this Christmas, great festive writing. May You have a Happy new year. Stu
Kendrick Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 3:34 PM
Stuart, Is that good or bad not to have snow in Liverpool? Thanks for dropping by. I appreciate the kind review. We haven't had snow here just two or three or four heavy frost. Sara
Sheehan Avatar
December 27, 2018 at 8:05 PM
Great description of a winter wonderland. Inspiring.
Kendrick Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 6:41 AM
Frank, Thanks for your kind review of my work. I appreciate you stopping by. Sara
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