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A Winter Storm

This winter storm comes
Without emotion, intellect, or care
Blowing its dry freezing air
Puffs up fallen leaves
Floats them up into the gray sky

Will it leave death in its turbulence
Trees uprooted?
Animals' den not warm enough?
Homeless humans without shelter frozen?


Are we above this emotionless storm?
What are our values? 
Do we have the right to judge?
What storm will it take to awake us?

The one with snow up to the rooftop
Or maybe water so deep we can't float
Maybe electrical constant flashings
Or maybe a storm in a desert

More intelligent than the storm
Mankind has figured them out
Why can't we figure out humans
Get our mortals back on track
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Kerr Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 12:13 AM
Hello Sara, Your imagism piece has amazing depth, scope, and atmosphere. I love the descriptions. Heartiest congratulations on your shared first placement in Constance’s Serenity contest. Howard
Kendrick Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 4:15 AM
Delighted that you dropped by with congratulations, Howard. I appreciate the time spent here reading and commenting on my work. Sara K.
George Avatar
December 23, 2022 at 7:32 PM
A poem with lines invoking deeper thoughts. How do we react to the unexpected crisis in life? What is our attitude to those caught in the whirl of a storm? Is it one of empathy? A beautiful composition so profound and philosophical too.
Kendrick Avatar
December 24, 2022 at 4:07 AM
Valsa, I went in a different direction with this one, however, this type of poem is not supposed to be philosophical so poetic license. Thanks for the visit. Sara
Poet Avatar
December 23, 2022 at 5:47 PM
This is a beautifully written poem, Sara. Your amazing imagery, combined with the already exquisite writing, was nothing short of spectacular.
Kendrick Avatar
December 24, 2022 at 4:04 AM
Thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the visit and you taking time to comment. Sara
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