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A Winter Scene

I close my eyes and dream of winters so pretty that even angels sigh at the scene cascading snowflakes softly falling, in shapes of doilies and paper ruffle dollies Winter hats and muffle mitts of red, snowman whispers as red sled rides go by carnival rides and children full of chide, what a wonderful world of white... A winter scent of magic, white deer and shadowed antlers of incandescent wood log cabins with fireplaces and verandas with copper foot welcome matts, come in make yourself comfortable while the kettle roars to life, tea toddler or coffee lover? Enter into my little jovial cottage glory and stay a while.

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Date: 1/8/2022 7:56:00 AM
I hate winter but found myself wanting to stroll through this wonderful world you painted while on my way to have tea! Thanking for opening my heart to winter (at least on paper)
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Date: 1/7/2022 2:09:00 AM
Picture perfect...Delice
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Date: 1/6/2022 9:39:00 PM
Thank you for the welcome, Vie:) lovely read:)
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Date: 1/6/2022 8:56:00 AM
How delightful! This exudes the warmth you possess. Your imagery paints a lovely winter scene to cozy up and have a chat. Love this! :) Paulette
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Date: 1/6/2022 12:04:00 PM
I love winter Paulette like you I like to spot the occasional bright bird in the distance, love the nature walks in the bare branched avenues, there is always hope for an early spring of course, thanks for the visit my friend :)
Date: 1/6/2022 5:40:00 AM
You painted a beautiful winter scene Vienna. Much enjoyed the journey through your eyes. I like the inviting tone of your ending lines.
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Date: 1/6/2022 12:03:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed the poem on winter Vijay, I love everythign about winter except the big storms, so far we are having a kind winter, thank God,
Date: 1/6/2022 1:34:00 AM
Winter has its beautiful scenes, no doubt. Hugs
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Date: 1/6/2022 12:02:00 PM
Thank you Victor, I do love winter and all its bright color, especially when it turns out to be a kind and gentle season, :)
Date: 1/6/2022 12:24:00 AM
Winter is my favourite season; I hate the hot weather! This poem reminded me how comfortable and happy I feel during this season. Kudos!
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Date: 1/6/2022 12:02:00 PM
I too love winter and fall, I don't like excessive heat, thank you for your presence on my page, be well, and may you be blessed not damned, pun intended lol
Date: 1/5/2022 8:26:00 PM
This sounds so cozy and inviting Vie. Winter is my favorite season here in Hawaii because it is the coolest. On the mainland I love autumn best with all its myriad of colors. Your poem shines in winter light. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 1/6/2022 12:01:00 PM
Thank you Connie for your wonderful visit, in Hawaii winter must be a treat with its gentle cool winds, love the sharing you gift me with, it helps me imagine your part of the world, Take care :)
Date: 1/5/2022 8:23:00 PM
Amen Vie. The cottage, the kettle, the "light" are plenty for me - I'm not thirsty, but winter does take us from the munDane. Well - said. Shalom shakom
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Date: 1/6/2022 12:00:00 PM
Thank you for your kind visit Anil, I loved the restful pleasance of winter :)