A Winter Poem

Using the snow spade to once again clear out the driveway,
I couldn't help but notice the lights that shimmered all day,
twinkling at me from the sunlight playing off of the snow,
giving the silver sparkling look of the fresh snow a certain glow,

During my repetitive shoveling I caught a glimpse of,
the gold ornaments I had hung on the tree in my front yard,
with the shiny icicles hanging down from my quaint log cabin house,
causing my love of the beautiful scenery to become aroused,

Continual shoveling made me break out in a sweat,
I knew pretty soon I would need to get some rest,
the snow drifts by my house getting higher each day,
with my dog running around in it wanting to play,

At least the snow flakes had somewhat let up,
as I grabbed my thermos and drank some hot chocolate from my cup,
suddenly it felt like there was an earthquake like shaking again,
as I watched all the snow flakes fall down blizzard like with disdain,

Wanting to go in my warm house and lounge around in my bathrobe,
instead I had to put on a winter Christmas picturesque show,
with the giant lifting me and my property up in the air,
I grabbed my dog and held onto my front porch railing with a certain stunt woman flair,

Used to this topsy-turvey world my dog and I lived in,
I saw the giant look at me with a big wide toothy grin,
like two mannequins my dog and I quickly struck a Norman Rockwell pose,
while the giant grabbed the remote and gently put down the snow globe.








12-1-16

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 12/4/2016 11:37:00 PM
Wow amazing... Perfect .
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 12/5/2016 6:39:00 AM
Thanks so much for your visit and kind comment Ruben!:)
Date: 12/4/2016 11:08:00 PM
Heh, I love the last line. Congratulations :)
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 12/5/2016 6:38:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind comment and visit Darren!:)
Date: 12/4/2016 7:26:00 PM
Cheryl, congratulations on your wonderful win :) This is a wonderful story. Very quick thinking Norman Rockwell pose. We wish you a Merry Christmas & a Happy New Year Hugs Eve
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 12/4/2016 7:38:00 PM
Thanks so much Eve; I'm glad you enjoyed it and I wish you a Merry Christmas & Happy New Year as well! Hugs~Che
Date: 12/4/2016 5:47:00 PM
Love the twist at the end of the poem Cheryl:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 12/4/2016 7:25:00 PM
Thank you so much Jan; I'm glad you enjoyed it & thanks for the congrats! Hugs~Che xx
Date: 12/4/2016 8:44:00 AM
You got me! ....again:-). big smilies — thanks! ~ john
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 12/4/2016 8:52:00 AM
Thanks lim'rik~ good to hear from you again!:)
Date: 12/2/2016 7:18:00 AM
WOW LOVE, LOVE, LOVE THIS!
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 12/2/2016 7:22:00 AM
Thanks so much Mike; glad you do my friend!!:)
Date: 12/1/2016 11:04:00 PM
oh wow! What a twist at the end of this.. very unexpected!!! This is cute, Cheryl, a fun winter poem :)
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Date: 12/2/2016 7:11:00 AM
Thank you so much Rebecca; I lengthened it yesterday not being satisfied with the ending! Glad you enjoyed it!:)
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