a winter moment


a winter moment
captured in a cold winter 
water vapored breath 

the air we exhale 
saturated with moisture 
meets cold air outside 

tiny particles 
soon turn to liquid water 
spouting from the mouth 

that filmy gray white  
air, that is exhaled outward 
makes it look like smoke 

fresh air in my lungs 
crisp is the air I breathe in 
nature at its best

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Date: 12/15/2023 5:10:00 PM
Wonderful haiku to match the cold winter days.
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Date: 12/14/2023 8:33:00 AM
Five wonderful haiku and the fourth one is my favourite.. all with their own unique imagery.. very nice Vienna..
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Date: 12/14/2023 3:55:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed the string of word Silent One, may you always find pleasure and meaning in poetry, :)
Date: 12/14/2023 6:24:00 AM
I love your haiku chain, every haikus just flows seamlessly and i see through your descriptive lines, vivid and beautiful imagery, the last one hits deep too sweet rose. Sending you light always. Absolute pleasure always reading your work
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Date: 12/14/2023 3:55:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your time and your opinion, it matters always :)
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