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a winter moment

a winter moment captured in a cold winter water vapored breath the air we exhale saturated with moisture meets cold air outside tiny particles soon turn to liquid water spouting from the mouth that filmy gray white air, that is exhaled outward makes it look like smoke fresh air in my lungs crisp is the air I breathe in nature at its best

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Jerry Brotherton

Date: 12/15/2023 5:10:00 PM

Wonderful haiku to match the cold winter days.

Silent One

Date: 12/14/2023 8:33:00 AM

Five wonderful haiku and the fourth one is my favourite.. all with their own unique imagery.. very nice Vienna..

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/14/2023 3:55:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed the string of word Silent One, may you always find pleasure and meaning in poetry, :)

Ink Empress

Date: 12/14/2023 6:24:00 AM

I love your haiku chain, every haikus just flows seamlessly and i see through your descriptive lines, vivid and beautiful imagery, the last one hits deep too sweet rose. Sending you light always. Absolute pleasure always reading your work

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/14/2023 3:55:00 PM

Thank you for sharing your time and your opinion, it matters always :)