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A Winter Haiku

prints of our snowshoes

ending where the trail is crossed

by a cougar's tracks


Jan. 16, 2022
For Tania Kitchin's 
Winter Haiku Poetry Contest
checked by howmanysyllables.com

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John Watt

December 10, 2022 at 10:34 PM

I have never been good at writing haiku, but I do admire when it is done well by a true poet. Well done! Makes me wish there was snow where I live.

S. Wesley Mcgranor

February 4, 2022 at 9:09 PM

What a treat!

Delice Arleen Skelly

January 27, 2022 at 3:50 AM

Very nice image with a sense of danger...Delice

Phyllis Babcock

January 19, 2022 at 8:43 AM

I get a nice visual. Can see those prints in the snow. lovely haiku. love phyl

Kim Merryman

January 18, 2022 at 12:59 PM

Oooh! Great visual, Andrea! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Sam Kauffman

January 18, 2022 at 11:17 AM

Andrea, this is a show stopper - the meeting of man and nature against a winter backdrop and you lived to tell the story making new footprints in the snow! Will be thinking about your encounter for a long time! We love to snowshoe. Sending you blessings!

Scott Thirtyseven

January 18, 2022 at 4:32 AM

Excellent, chuckled heartily. To answer your question regarding Australia, we are one country made up of 5 States and 2 Territories. States and Territories that maintain some independence from each other and the Commonwealth. Not all states and territories have the same laws, unless they are commonwealth laws. I understand that the United States are very similar. The upshot is, none of our States or Territories have dealt with COVID the same, and all have defied the Commonwealth at some stage.

Andrea Dietrich

January 18, 2022 at 5:28 PM

well that is good to know. I hope you are standing on the side for freedom.

Unseeking Seeker

January 18, 2022 at 4:20 AM

Simply superb! I see it has won a contest too :)

Terry Miller

January 18, 2022 at 12:57 AM

Excellent, should have placed higher IMHO, best Terry.

Kim Rodrigues

January 17, 2022 at 7:14 PM

A close call! Love the ku!

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 17, 2022 at 12:29 PM

- Back with a congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Lawless

January 17, 2022 at 12:11 PM

now that's an attention grabber......

Rico Leffanta

January 17, 2022 at 11:41 AM

I could not help but Fav this one! Well done, indeed! Aloha!

Joseph P. DiMino

January 17, 2022 at 11:22 AM

For sure; angels are watching over us. Great imagery! Good he was a vegitarian. Joe.

Alexis Y.

January 17, 2022 at 9:17 AM

Hi Andrea, Just the thought of this happening and one not knowing is terrifying. Good imagery and content. Congratulations on your win. Have a great day-Alexis

Tania Kitchin

January 17, 2022 at 8:43 AM

Andrea, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful poem!

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 17, 2022 at 5:53 AM

- ... I hope it was not hungry ... a great one, Andrea - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judy Ball

January 17, 2022 at 4:31 AM

WoW! Excellent Haiku. Think I'd turn back to right now. I remember going on a fishing trip with my husband and my dog found some fresh bear tracks. I got scared and went back and told him. We decided to fish elsewhere. God Bless, JB