A Winter Bee Tale







                 Breezy swept forest
                 Tired serene young bee naps
                 Despite hooting owl
                 

               
                     March 15, 2020
       
                       7:30pm PST
                
                 
                     English Haiku
                        5/7/5

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 3/18/2020 12:34:00 PM
We'll have to do something about that owl...maybe a face mask...nice imagery
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Date: 3/16/2020 8:51:00 PM
Somehow I see the cutest little bee napping away on a daisy blossom. Well imaged.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/17/2020 5:20:00 PM
Thank goodness you, ML, saw the bee! Panagiota xx
Date: 3/16/2020 1:01:00 PM
Helllo panagiota, the bee is a sound sleeper in order to sleep though the owl's song. have a nce day my friend. Hugs Darlene xx
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/17/2020 6:16:00 PM
Hello Panagota,I like the sound of the owl.I could sleep through that sound. I think the bees could to. Haave a nice evening my friend. xx Hugs Darlene
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/16/2020 3:00:00 PM
Hello, Darlene. Yes, imagine the hoot of the ow!... Who could nap or sleep with that sound? Maybe, the bee had tiny earmuffs? Blessing on you for shaing, my friend. Panagiota xx
Date: 3/16/2020 3:43:00 AM
Nature at its best, love the scene. Tom
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/16/2020 11:45:00 AM
It was a challenge writing this Tom. I learned bees do not sleep...they take naps. Was stung by a bee once, who folllowed me to the bus....got on (he paid no fare) and he stung me. Worst pain ever! Passengers had to calm me down. I was crying and screaming. Panagiota xx
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