A Winter Bee Tale

Breezy swept forest Tired serene young bee naps Despite hooting owl March 15, 2020 7:30pm PST English Haiku 5/7/5

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Arturo Michael

Date: 3/18/2020 12:34:00 PM

We'll have to do something about that owl...maybe a face mask...nice imagery

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/16/2020 8:51:00 PM

Somehow I see the cutest little bee napping away on a daisy blossom. Well imaged.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/17/2020 5:20:00 PM

Thank goodness you, ML, saw the bee! Panagiota xx

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/16/2020 1:01:00 PM

Helllo panagiota, the bee is a sound sleeper in order to sleep though the owl's song. have a nce day my friend. Hugs Darlene xx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/17/2020 6:16:00 PM

Hello Panagota,I like the sound of the owl.I could sleep through that sound. I think the bees could to. Haave a nice evening my friend. xx Hugs Darlene

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/16/2020 3:00:00 PM

Hello, Darlene. Yes, imagine the hoot of the ow!... Who could nap or sleep with that sound? Maybe, the bee had tiny earmuffs? Blessing on you for shaing, my friend. Panagiota xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/16/2020 3:43:00 AM

Nature at its best, love the scene. Tom

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/16/2020 11:45:00 AM

It was a challenge writing this Tom. I learned bees do not sleep...they take naps. Was stung by a bee once, who folllowed me to the bus....got on (he paid no fare) and he stung me. Worst pain ever! Passengers had to calm me down. I was crying and screaming. Panagiota xx