'a Wine Smell'

Wafts greeted me at the door already Dreaded going inside, not knowing If a clash between right and wrong Was on the schedule again It’s become a routine His manners replaced, Like his cologne Surpass by A wine Smell
Wilma Neels In honour of Madam Oink :) Contest: Anagrammatically Speaking 5th Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/12/2011 7:25:00 AM
Very nice write. The moment of the unknown is scary and you definitely captured it. I would have been placed you higher. Anyway, congrats on your win!
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Date: 4/12/2011 6:23:00 AM
Many warmest congrats Wilma for this superb write.
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Date: 4/12/2011 5:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Wilma in Nikko's "Anagram" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/11/2011 5:47:00 PM
Wilma, congratulations on your win!! Thanks for stoppin' by! Ellen <3
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Date: 4/11/2011 4:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 4/11/2011 3:07:00 PM
Big smiles seeing you in the winners' circle, Wilma. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/11/2011 1:58:00 PM
Congrats Wilma on your big win in Nikko's great contest with this exceptional entry so special my friend.. enjoy another top spot with luv..
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Date: 4/11/2011 11:45:00 AM
Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of nikko, Wilma
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Date: 4/11/2011 11:38:00 AM
Well, Madame Oink was pretty much impressed with your etheree, Missy! How cool was your anagram?? And you laced in some seriousness in here too... well I hope there'd be no wine smell lingering -- Super congrats on your win -- now where's is that nose write??? hahaa hugs :)
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Date: 3/17/2011 4:30:00 PM
Perfection, as usual my Wilma.
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Date: 3/15/2011 12:41:00 PM
This is a poem which is dazzled with brilliance 'A Wine Smell'!Goodluck in the contest--'I Thank Ash'
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Date: 3/14/2011 3:15:00 PM
Oh, my, you are a wine smell??? hahaha. (did you make HIM the wine smell?) Wait till you see MY wonderful anagram. I am so proud of it, but I have to think of a poem to do it justice. I enjoyed reading this and your little tribute to the OINKER> hahaha.
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Date: 3/14/2011 10:42:00 AM
Isn't it amazing what the anagrams of our names contain? I really like your etheree. Had a boyfriend who was a drinker. When I smelled the liquor, I never knew what to expect from him. You conveyed this message so well. Wishing you success in the contest, Wilma! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/14/2011 6:54:00 AM
Awesome words to this contest entry Wilma.. luv this form too and your expressions are so vital and vivid my friend.. good luck in the contest if so entered.. I just posted my entry for Madam Oink too.. she is so sweet.. luv..
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Date: 3/14/2011 6:34:00 AM
After a very super weekend I am back at the soup reading. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Wilma. There are so many diverse writers here and I am so happy I am able to read most of them. Have a wonderful week and may you find what you are looking for in life and in your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/13/2011 5:55:00 PM
beautiful analogy, Wilma
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Date: 3/13/2011 3:38:00 PM
Very nice poem....love this form Wilma ....Jimmy
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Date: 3/13/2011 3:12:00 PM
:)))
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Date: 3/13/2011 2:50:00 PM
I love my wine, and I love this write.... serenity pours from this Poem.. well written and a beautiful form..love Michael
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Date: 3/13/2011 1:16:00 PM
Nice wilma,... what a brilliant poem... the smell that suppress a gentle look... wine has a very ravage appealing smell... sure enjoyed.. always p.d.
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