Wilma Neels Poet Etheree

'a Wine Smell'

Wafts greeted me at the door already
Dreaded going inside, not knowing
If a clash between right and wrong
Was on the schedule again
It’s become a routine
His manners replaced,
Like his cologne
Surpass by
A wine 
Smell

Wilma Neels

In honour of Madam Oink :)

Contest: Anagrammatically Speaking
5th Place

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Black Eyed Susan April 12, 2011 at 7:25 AM Very nice write. The moment of the unknown is scary and you definitely captured it. I would have been placed you higher. Anyway, congrats on your win!

Tahera Mannan April 12, 2011 at 6:23 AM Many warmest congrats Wilma for this superb write.

Carol Sunshine Brown April 12, 2011 at 5:39 AM Congratulations on your win Wilma in Nikko's "Anagram" contest. Love, Carol

Ellen Fahey April 11, 2011 at 5:47 PM Wilma, congratulations on your win!! Thanks for stoppin' by! Ellen <3

Sara Kendrick April 11, 2011 at 4:23 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire April 11, 2011 at 3:07 PM Big smiles seeing you in the winners' circle, Wilma. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 11, 2011 at 1:58 PM Congrats Wilma on your big win in Nikko's great contest with this exceptional entry so special my friend.. enjoy another top spot with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta April 11, 2011 at 11:45 AM Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of nikko, Wilma

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 11, 2011 at 11:38 AM Well, Madame Oink was pretty much impressed with your etheree, Missy! How cool was your anagram?? And you laced in some seriousness in here too... well I hope there'd be no wine smell lingering -- Super congrats on your win -- now where's is that nose write??? hahaa hugs :)

Sidney Hall Mad Poet March 17, 2011 at 4:30 PM Perfection, as usual my Wilma.

Kash Poet March 15, 2011 at 12:41 PM This is a poem which is dazzled with brilliance 'A Wine Smell'!Goodluck in the contest--'I Thank Ash'

Andrea Dietrich March 14, 2011 at 3:15 PM Oh, my, you are a wine smell??? hahaha. (did you make HIM the wine smell?) Wait till you see MY wonderful anagram. I am so proud of it, but I have to think of a poem to do it justice. I enjoyed reading this and your little tribute to the OINKER> hahaha.

Carolyn Devonshire March 14, 2011 at 10:42 AM Isn't it amazing what the anagrams of our names contain? I really like your etheree. Had a boyfriend who was a drinker. When I smelled the liquor, I never knew what to expect from him. You conveyed this message so well. Wishing you success in the contest, Wilma! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 14, 2011 at 6:54 AM Awesome words to this contest entry Wilma.. luv this form too and your expressions are so vital and vivid my friend.. good luck in the contest if so entered.. I just posted my entry for Madam Oink too.. she is so sweet.. luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown March 14, 2011 at 6:34 AM After a very super weekend I am back at the soup reading. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Wilma. There are so many diverse writers here and I am so happy I am able to read most of them. Have a wonderful week and may you find what you are looking for in life and in your writing. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta March 13, 2011 at 5:55 PM beautiful analogy, Wilma

Jimmy Anderson March 13, 2011 at 3:38 PM Very nice poem....love this form Wilma ....Jimmy

Jay Del Fierro March 13, 2011 at 3:12 PM :)))

Michael J. Falotico March 13, 2011 at 2:50 PM I love my wine, and I love this write.... serenity pours from this Poem.. well written and a beautiful form..love Michael

Poet Destroyer A March 13, 2011 at 1:16 PM Nice wilma,... what a brilliant poem... the smell that suppress a gentle look... wine has a very ravage appealing smell... sure enjoyed.. always p.d.