A Windy Day

Since the mind is unsteady, turbulent, obstinate and very strong, controlling the mind is more difficult than controlling the wind." (Bhagavad Gita 6:34) Putting a parka on he hooded himself and walked into the beating rain heading for the journey out he felt wild crazy and insane life had sent him in a new direction leaving him bereft at mid section some higher power had him circling his fears and he missed the train? Wind whipped his face, tears stung his cheek he couldn't remember the last time he felt so weak Try as he may he could not stop the shaking, had he missed the plane? a long forgotten voice made its way home to him, like a friend you are only thirty five years old, this does not have to be the end so he sat on a park bench and prayed for his mind to calm Right then and there in the water a beautiful white swan, gliding in the most graceful way, paddling as hard as it could without, nothing to say... June 24, 2021
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Date: 6/24/2021 8:26:00 PM
Nicely composed, my friend. And a skillful display of emotions and images. After seeing this, I understood that we instantly assume in the most when we dive just because we're paddling. Definitive conclusion! "paddling without a word to say." Blessings dear Rose
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Date: 6/24/2021 7:58:00 AM
Superb ending! " paddling with nothing to say" I felt after reading this that we humans think a lot while swam was quite although paddling. This poem inspired me. Thanks loved reading the verse qouted above from my favourite book.
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Date: 6/24/2021 7:42:00 AM
Strong write, Mystic:)
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Date: 6/24/2021 6:53:00 AM
as has been noted many times .. the graceful swan appears tranquil but is paddling like crazy beneath the water....
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Date: 6/24/2021 5:25:00 AM
That book is special! I hear your message my friend--much depth you convey.
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Date: 6/24/2021 4:09:00 AM
You have created a nice image of turbulence. The swan is a captivating touch: The meaning of a swan is grace, beauty, love, trust, and loyalty. Swan symbolism is also linked to inner beauty and self-love. So the poem ends with calm restored. A very nice ending...Delice
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Date: 6/24/2021 3:57:00 AM
An intelligent expose` of emotions and imagery. Beautiful verse. Hugs.
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