A wind to my youth

I heard a wind breezing in my ear
It took me to a time when I was young
I saw an willow tree bending with the wind 
It took me to a time when thousand tears were shade
Every pain felt like a blade 

A time when thousand rules were broke
A person I wanted to hold
A moment where nothing felt incomplete 
Nothing was blue 
Nothing was gray

Climbing through the roof I saw a bird 
It flew to the people I used to love 
It looked to the people for whom I starved 
It met some people who lost me 
It met some people whom I lost
It met some people I never lost

When It came back to me 
Asked if I regret meeting them
How can I regret such a time when my youth ricocheted 
See through me and you'll hear the voices 
It's best among all of the noises

A song felt so good
Some people who weren't dead
Some memories that wasn't vanished
A glass which wasn't splited 
An excuse where thousand reasons were given

Everything was shining 
Because a version of me kept trying

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Date: 9/27/2024 10:09:00 AM
Hello Anika, Welcome to PS, this is very heartfelt and touching. Life’s a challenge but giving in or giving up isn’t an option. I am glad of what you said in the end of your poem, “a version of me kept trying,” that’s beautiful. Stay Blessed.
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Date: 9/27/2024 11:08:00 AM
Thank you so much for your valuable comment. Life is definitely a very beautiful thing. I'll keep working hard and won't give up. Thanks for your compliment. It means a lot. Have a great weekend and stay fine.
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