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A wind to my youth

I heard a wind breezing in my ear It took me to a time when I was young I saw an willow tree bending with the wind It took me to a time when thousand tears were shade Every pain felt like a blade A time when thousand rules were broke A person I wanted to hold A moment where nothing felt incomplete Nothing was blue Nothing was gray Climbing through the roof I saw a bird It flew to the people I used to love It looked to the people for whom I starved It met some people who lost me It met some people whom I lost It met some people I never lost When It came back to me Asked if I regret meeting them How can I regret such a time when my youth ricocheted See through me and you'll hear the voices It's best among all of the noises A song felt so good Some people who weren't dead Some memories that wasn't vanished A glass which wasn't splited An excuse where thousand reasons were given Everything was shining Because a version of me kept trying

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Date: 9/27/2024 10:09:00 AM
Hello Anika, Welcome to PS, this is very heartfelt and touching. Life’s a challenge but giving in or giving up isn’t an option. I am glad of what you said in the end of your poem, “a version of me kept trying,” that’s beautiful. Stay Blessed.
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Anika Farjana
Date: 9/27/2024 11:08:00 AM
Thank you so much for your valuable comment. Life is definitely a very beautiful thing. I'll keep working hard and won't give up. Thanks for your compliment. It means a lot. Have a great weekend and stay fine.

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